My Lovely Mortal

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“Oh My God!!” I manage to yell. ‘BOOM!!’ luckily the star landed far enough from my cottage. Feeling curious, I get out from the cottage and make my way to the fallen star. I can’t help but to feel cautious over the object that almost landed on top of my house. My leg stop when I finally stand close enough with the object which was buried a bit in the ground. I walk around the fallen object as it was surrounded with fog all over it. After the fog dismissed, I can see the object clearly. It looks like a capsule but then the capsule crack open and melt into the ground. I stepped back waiting for what will happen next. After a few minutes that seems like years later, nothing happen.

“Geez, nothing happen.” I walk away in disappointment. After a few steps, I decided to check the hole that the object left hoping I’ll find something interesting. To my surprise, there is. There lay an angelic looking man dress in white silk dress shirt and white pants. How in the world did he get there? I thought to myself. Jumping down to him, I slap his flawless face gently. Trying to wake him, but to no avail. So I tried to check his heart beat by cupping my right ear to his chest. ‘dup dup’ it beat calmly. Once again I tried to wake him by slapping his face, a bit harder this time but still no response. 

Foreword

I am working very hard on this. I thought it would be a short one but after i finish the plot. It looks like it gonna be a long story. I'll delete 'Mortal Love' so expect no updates about that story. I'm gonna turn it into one shot. I would really appreciate it if you readers leave a comment . Happy reading. XOXO!

 

Chocolate94
Should i start this story again?

Comments

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Darknight456 #1
Awesome! Love this story. Update soon.
Iyllia
#2
Chapter 9: Please update soon authornim ^^ ~~
iwillalwaysloveyou48
#3
Chapter 9: hi authornim ^^ new reader here!!
I really love your story! so awesome! I can't help myself blush with those cheesy lines!!! AMPH!
can't wait for your next update authornim ^·^
moonyuki
#4
Chapter 8: Awoo ~ Love War is already began >,<
moonyuki
#5
Chapter 7: Chanyeol is a Demon ?! OMG >,<
Kpopfan20 #6
Chapter 8: Love this story!
missya #7
Chapter 6: Choose both and you will b happy for the rest of your life...no doubt... Both cute and handsome...no need to think anymore....hehehe
missya #8
Chapter 5: Tat something is krisssss....yeayyyyy
Both my bias.....
I like it a lot....making the story so good....
Hurry up authornim and update again...^_^
missya #9
Chapter 3: I am waiting for this something to appear....
Lay is so cute...will there b another angel???
Update again soon ok
moonyuki
#10
Chapter 2: “Because I’m yours to keep. No one else but you.” - YiXing
Argh!!! I'm melt right now.....
update soon :)