Love in Vain

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Description

Seongyeol never took everything seriously. He thought it was a game. 

 

Gyuri had something on her mind. 

Their relationship was already going for 8 years. It tasted like bland food. 

That's why Gyuri proposed a game to him. 

 

"Let's just play the game again!" 

"What is it? Break up and make up game? Are we playing this thing again?"

 

Seongyeol agreed to it. But there's one thing he didn't know it. 

He never saw the end was coming. 

 

Foreword

Wellllllllll.... 

Kekekeke I know, Gyuri and Seongyeol were never being couple in any fanfic or even fans imagination. Nothing can be related between them. 

That's why I called them mismatch couple. 

I don't make this couple because I love to see them as couple but just for story sake. ^^ I just thought their characters fit the story.

 

Last, enjoy the story and don't forget to comment. ^^

The poster and background are made by YeolliepopeLement at Madness Wonderlandshop. Thank you so much for the lovely poster.^^  

 

Girls, lately I request a review on review shop. So this is my review for this Fic and the sequel one. *fiuh I got pretty good result, better than my last ff. kkkk* 

Total 74/100

Title (5/5)

Appearence (3/5)

Foreword & Description (10/15)

Characters (12/15)

Plot (15/20)

Flow (8/10)

Language (14/20)

Enjoyment (7/10)

 

FULL REVIEW by NEON™ Reviews [OPEN]

Thank you for giving me some advice for better performance. ^^ 

Mei

Let's dream and make it real. 

decemberdaisy
sorry i can't keep my promise tonight. something happen in my house kekeke. that's why I still haven't typed the story yet.

Comments

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redshannshine #1
Gyuri and L please
NicoleSeyong
#2
Chapter 1: so sad..
If he loves her then why he need to be cheating on her??
Now I really need to know what is it in seungyeol mind..
I need to know his true feeling..
Author-nim can U continue making seungyeol version??
pleaseeeeee!!!!
psycho_d
#3
Chapter 1: Love this!! U should make more Gyuri story...pleaseeeee~~~~
Make Gyuri&L story....ohhh,my OTP...