A Punishment Unwarranted

Description

It was a tragic mistake. A misunderstanding, even. Kyuhyun did not understand; why did it have to happen?

 

My first try at something angsty, based off a story I read before. Beware, character death! Comments are appreciated~

Foreword

Choi Siwon shook his head as he took in the details in the room, from the motionless man lying on the bed, scratches of all sizes evident all over his body, to the photo frame still gripped tightly in his hand, rigor mortis already set in motion, to the messily scrawled words on the opposite wall, the last message from the man to the one he loves most. Without hesitation, he took out his trusted Bible from the back of his pocket and murmured a prayer that this man would make it safely to the arms of Heaven. 

 

"Oh Holy Lord, pray have heart for this man,

 for this was a punishment unwarranted..."

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
Saya_ELF #1
Chapter 1: Hello authornim,

Can I translate your great fanfiction in my language, indonesia? I want to share your ff in my facebook and blog. If you allow it, I will translate this but of course, I will take a credit. Can you allow me? :)
Gyaaaa #2
Chapter 1: Awww, that was sad...

Will you make a next chapter? If you do, kill min please.. Don't make him suffer because kyu was gone.. And that partly is his fault..

But this is your story after all, do as you wish.. ^^

Thanks for writing..
ninja_min
#3
Chapter 1: O_O

but where did minnie go though? did he know what happened to kyu?
Kyumin_yewook #4
Chapter 1: Wow, that was breath-taking!