Chapter 1: Hmmm the ending was a little awkward because it just stops suddenly and well. I suppose endings are hard to smooth out without it being cliche.
What I kinda am confused about is that Seungri knew that they were together as buddies out of loneliness, no strings attached whatever. So, why the confession and why is Jiyong not breaking hearts like he is supposed to considering his 'heartbreaker' title? Hmm. Idk.
Chapter 1: It was cute, but a bit too short? I guess... I liked it but to make it better you could have further the story more. Not adding another chapter but maybe include G-Dragon's P.O.V too?
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