Come In

These Violent Delights

 

 

The thing that draws Kibum back to the present is a gentle prodding at his chest. He looks down, away from Taemin, to find himself being poked with a relatively small parcel wrapped in sparkling red with gold ts. He looks up again, in disbelief, as Taemin continues to shove the present at him.

 

When he fails to make any move to take it, Taemin clears his throat and begins to speak. “Uh…saenggilchukahamida, Key-hyung. I…um…I just dropped by to give you this.”

 

In the time that it takes for Kibum to lose his voice and for Taemin to speak, Woohyun and Nicole come to the door to see whose guest it was that had arrived.

 

Neither of them recognise Taemin at first, not even when he waves at them and says “Annyeong, sunbae-nim.”  

 

It is Woohyun who finally says it aloud. “TAEMIN? Lee Taemin?”

 

The rest of the house falls silent, and there is suddenly a rush of feet towards the door. Then Jonghyun and Jinki are by his side, the former being held back by the latter.

 

“For the love of …” Jonghyun grips Kibum’s shoulder painfully, eyes narrowing. “What the are you doing here?”

 

Taemin takes a step back and waves the red box at them. “It’s nothing, I was just here to give this to Kibum-hyung.” He shoves it at Kibum again, holding it away from himself as if he’s just waiting to bolt down the stairs.

 

Now Yixing, Seop and Changmin have joined them, and the ruckus they are beginning to make causes one of their neighbours to open her front door and look out. She rolls her eyes when she sees which house it is disrupting the peace, which is unwarranted, Kibum thinks, because they are so quiet otherwise.

 

Kibum takes a step back and holds the door open. “I suppose you should come in.”

 

Taemin shakes his head. “I should go.”

 

Jonghyun reaches out and shoves him. “Go on, then. off like you did the last time.” He’s about to shove Taemin again when Jinki and Nicole catch him around the waist and pull him back into the dorm. Seop sidesteps the struggling bunch and comes to stand by the door.

 

“Come in,” Kibum says again.

 

Taemin takes one, two hesitant steps forward, and then catches Kibum in a hug. The air is knocked out of Kibum’s lungs. Taemin’s clothes squelch between them and Kibum’s face is pressed into his wet hair, and all Kibum remembers is the hundred of times he has grabbed Taemin like this – winning on Inkigayo, on his birthday, while they are resting backstage – and how it feels exactly the same.

 

It’s over too quickly and yet not soon enough, and Taemin is stepping back, ready to leave now that the present is in Kibum’s hands. He reaches out and catches Taemin’s wrist -  

 

“I said come in.”

 

- and Taemin does. 

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err4tic
#1
Chapter 22: Reading this again for the nth time. Sigh. Still as moving as the first time I read it.

Couldn’t that bartender talk to anyone? Leaving Jinki’s story like that... but then, some stories really never get the closure you need it to have.
shunkey
#2
I've been digesting this fic for the past few days. Your writing, storyline, characterization are incredible! Once I started reading I really couldn't stop until the end. To be honest, some parts of the last few chapters were not easy to read, to say the least, but I really liked the resolution, especially after reading the separate epilogue. I loved how slow the transition to taekey was, so when it finally happened it definitely had a bigger impact!
The only thing I can't stop thinking about is the poor manager that will probably live believing that they were murderers until the end, I can imagine how creepy it was for him to discover that they had lied and I kinda hoped he would ask but of course if it really was true he couldn't risk it haha.
Thank you so much for writing, and for writing for taekey <3
shunkey
#3
Chapter 14: I came here for the taekey and now I don't want keyseop to break up ? I hope they won't hurt each other too much... Time to keep on reading, this is amazing!
HanabiPC
#4
Wow. This is a dream come true for shawols/taekey shippers who love to read. I enjoyed this like I normally do when I read good prose/fiction. I love the characterization and the balance of imagery and insights. I’m glad I discovered this belatedly (as a completed piece already) because the wait would’ve been agonizing. It was like reading a novel and at times like reading a screenplay. I’m amazed that you managed to keep the storyline tight. I also loved how you wrapped it up. I was in tears when I read Kibum’s insights on happiness in the end part. Please keep writing. And thank you for this. <3
err4tic
#5
Chapter 18: This is officially the most beautiful TaeKey fanfic I've ever read. I said I was going to comment in the last chapter, but Taemin's plea for Key to pretend he's someone else broke me. And this is the first time ever made me feel like bawling my eyes out.
zialabell #6
Chapter 22: I....hate you and love you so much at the same time. You mixing in reality makes this 100000 more painful to read. And thinkng about the members having to go away to military soon im just...broken by this fic x 100.

I'm a sobbing mess and my pillow's hella wet right now. I love how you create such complexity to the members in your story that it's almost crossing over with reality at times. Everyone has their reasons to do what they did and oh my god the plot twist for Jinki tho....*sobbs unstoppably* I'm sorry i'm not very good with expressing my self but I truly love this piece you created. Though I probably won't be reading it again soon or I'll need theraphy to heal.

Thank you for writing this.
andthepointiswhat #7
Chapter 22: Omg... this fanfic left me completely speechless! It's very well written. I really like how you used situations that happened in real life (like jjongs accident and jinkis throat issue). Wish we could have seen more of 2mins relationship after Tae was back in the group.
I never imagined Jinki commiting suicide! I cried so hard! Jin manager should have confronted the group about it. It's said that he quit thinking shinee were murderers.
Will you write a sequel or something? I want to know how everyones life is 5years later! ( i hope Key returns to Korea and ends up with Taemin)
I probably have more comments, but these are all I can remember right now
aoajisai #8
Chapter 22: I've made it a point to avoid reading sad/angsty stories as much as I can because it really hits me hard. However, I cannot not finish reading this fanfic of yours. You can say that I have a love/hate relationship with sad/angsty stories.

I love how you portrayed the dark side of the entertainment industry (let's face it, it's not all flowers and sunshine) and the abnormalities and complexities of idol life. Despite the perfect persona and happy facade that they show to the public, we, the fans will never know the extent of what they are going through. Idols are doing a damn good job of distracting us from our real life, that most are blinded by the marketing and PR, the business side. Fans hungrily gobble up the "perfect illusion"; deluding themselves to the point of unhealthy obsession.

I hope most delusional fans would be able to read this to get a grasp of what happens behind the camera and offstage. While this plot is purely fiction, the environment that you presented is totally true.

I wasn't expecting that you'd kill Jinki here but I cannot say that I didn't saw it coming. I really appreciate that you showed realistic emotions of each character (it must have been hard) and tackled depression well.

Thank you for writing this beautiful story! I hope you'll write an epilogue or something. Kudos for a job greatly done and see you in your other stories. :)
onlytwocubesdown #9
Chapter 22: Well, it's been an awfully long time since I cried over a fanfic, but here we are.

How many ways can I say that I loved everything about this? The way you portrayed the complexities and ins-and-outs of all of their interactions and relationships was so unerringly human that I think almost every chapter broke my heart in some way. Everything about the story, the characters, the way it all unfolds is absolutely beautiful and I find myself sympathising with each and every point of view. The natural progression of their lives was so perfect, and although I completely wasn't expecting all of the things that happened in the last couple of chapters, it fits together so well and the ending is exactly how it should have been. Also, the way you tied the story in with real events was just fabulous, and really added to the realism of the whole thing.

Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story. Only, now I feel irrationally worried over their real life well-being, haha. Gonna go check out what Onew's been up recently so I can remind myself that he's actually alright. Once again, great job, this is one of the best fics I've ever read.