Chapter 1: wow, this is really good. it's great seeing someone write a fic of this calibre for this underrated pairing.
my favourite scene would have to be that weighty confession scene, sooyoung admitting her feelings to taeyeon for the first time (the first "i love you"). i love how you structured it in such a way that the confession would come out naturally - not just for sooyoung's character, but for the readers as well (i, as a reader, personally felt that the quietness of the living room, contrasting their previous small moment of euphoria, was the perfect location for sooyoung to confess). the progression after the confession was so beautiful and natural, which really says a lot regarding the story's good character development and plot build-up: you managed to draw catharsis (shown by their messy/eager kisses) without making it look cheesy and overdone, yet retain the quietness and subtlety and intimacy of the scene.
definitely one of my fave fics here. keep it up! :-)
Chapter 1: YOU WERE HIDING SOMETHING SO AMAZING, BERNYBRO?! WHY DID YOU NOT PUBLISH THIS EARLIER?! THIS WAS SO AMAZING. SORRY FOR COMMENTING IN ALMOST ALL YOUR FICS. I LOVE YOU TOO MUCH. ;~;
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