steps to oblivion

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Step One, close your eyes.

Step Two, imagine their smile.

Step Three, grab their hand.

Step Four, let go.

 

                                           - Unknown

 

 

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Foreword

 

Prompt No. 21

"People disappear when they die. Their voice, their laughter, the warmth of their breath. Their flesh. Eventually their bones. All living memory of them ceases. This is both dreadful and natural. Yet for some there is an exception to this annihilation. For in the books they write they continue to exist. We can rediscover them. Their humor, their tone of voice, their moods. Through the written word they can anger you or make you happy. They can comfort you. They can perplex you. They can alter you. All this, even though they are dead. Like flies in amber, like corpses frozen in the ice, that which according to the laws of nature should pass away is, by the miracle of ink on paper, preserved. It is a kind of magic."

 

 

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MoonloverXD
#1
Chapter 1: This will be forever one of my favorite stories. It made feel a mix of feelings.
I loved Woohyun's thoughts and opinions about life and how people make us do things they want. How they expect us to feel and do things their way.
I also I understand why she called herself selfish, but was she? I don't know!
Just like how Woohyun felt about his crush, I think she felt the same with him.
Also we don't know if he died or left, but I don't think he was okay. He was 18 years old and had a huge responsibility on his shoulder with the other's expectations.

This king of story will live forever with its readers.
It's been years since I first read it, and I kept searching for it until I found it and read it again.
You are an amazing writer.
markmeupifnt
#2
Chapter 1: one of the best that i've read and i don't mind reading it again and again <333
tinydream
#3
Chapter 1: Just finished it.
Damn. I am teary you know. Its well written.
Hufff...
I was debating with my own self. I cant read angsty. Bcoz somedays ago i was read an angsty one thou. That is why i am debated it "read or not"

But yes i was reading this story.
Its so logic, i think. How you wrote this story its nice..

Your last point. I dont get it sorry ahaha.
I mean, which last text? the step four?

Hopely you'll answer my replied. Thank you~~
average_aqua #4
Chapter 1: it's a nice story, though i'm dying to know what happen to them..
gosastrid
#5
Chapter 1: Idk if its because english is not my mother language or because i have a low IQ, but i dont really get the point. But i just wonder how can u write so beautifully....its just.....so amazing. I keep saying "whoooaa" when i read it. You are so good, u should publish a book! And i would be ur biggest fan:-)
cutedaragon #6
Chapter 1: Guess I' m not that clever hahahah, wth exactly is the secret message?hehehe I hope you make more woohyun fic..your writing is really jjang
healingprocess #7
Chapter 1: I literally made an account just so I could comment on this piece. It's totally beautiful. I love your slice of life style! I honestly think you should try to get something published.

There is a depth and flow that is just so absorbing. But also a sense of reality. Like the part where she thought he was going to kiss her but he didn't. I loved that. Your strength is definitely in how you write your characters. The narrator seems perceptive, but she's also honest about her own flaws and biases, which is lovely.

It seems like you're on hiatus, but I hope I can read something more from you in the future.
anticlimatic
#8
Chapter 1: Well I guess I'm just a stupid idiot who didn't get the secret message. Huh.

That's beside the point. This story is absolutely amazing. It's beautifully written. It was bittersweet, and I adored every second of it. I'm no writer, but let me tell you this - I can recognize a good story when I see one. Nowadays, it can be a bit hard to find the perfect story that's well written, but I think I hit the jackpot on this one. Now, I feel as though I'm going on for far too long right now, so let's just keep it short and simple: Congratulations, and keep on writing.

Keep up the good work.
moemonster #9
Chapter 1: why did I tear up after reading the secret message... author-nim! you write too well... ㅠㅅㅠ