Elegy

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In the end, all that mattered to Yongguk was that Himchan would continue to love him most. 

Foreword

 

An angst-deprivation fueled one shot, littered with bits of psychopathy, and envy and my lack of actual writing capability
 
He was writing this song for Himchan, after all. Best not to spoil anything for him. 
 
 
 

 

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chibiiELF #1
It was really good! Well written! ^^ I wanted to say a lot more things but I'm shockingly speechless. Fighting and Hwaiting! ^^v
MollsLeMouse #2
Chapter 1: I don't saw it coming, the end, oh god... The story it's... argh! It isn't Daehyun's fault, anybody actually but... /crying.
This was really beautiful and the tittle is amazing.
lgkaupk #3
Chapter 1: It was so beautiful! Thank You!
CindfrogBlue #4
Chapter 1: At first I hesitant to read this bcs Im not ready to all the feelings I'll feel. But here I am crying hard and typing this with some tears fall on my friend's screen phone (cause im using his phone and his phone is touch screen) and damn I love your type of writing ♥
storyteller_x #5
Chapter 1: Three things:

1. You have an excellent taste for beautiful story titles.
2. This plot twist---I can't. *sniffs into a tissue*
3. Congratulations, you just broke my heart a little. Keep writing!
Almantina #6
Chapter 1: It was great, don't be so critic about it.
So Daehyun and Himchan were together? Clearly, Yongguk loved Himchan more tho.
TrinTrin #7
Chapter 1: Hmm. I don’t know about this one. It’s not my favourite.

HAHAH JUST KIDDING I LOVE IT. TOO MUCH IN FACT, TOO MUCH.

Okay I’ll be good now. Right so to summarize, this was perfect. All my expectations were met, and more. I hate to say it but omfg you totally had me fooled. Like I legit had to pick my jaw up off the floor after I read this. To say that plot twist was unexpected would be an understatement. I was reading through it like, ‘Ah, this is nice and angsty. Hmm, yes, very good, very good.’ And then the plot twist happened and my jaw was on the floor, and the tears were just everywhere. It didn't help that it was so beautifully written. Like seriously girl, you write some exquisite shizzle. So stop calling it trash m’kay?

And no, I will not accept your apology for the ending. It was flawless.
TrinTrin #8
I cannot express my excitement through words omfg. It's moments like this when I question why my life isn't a musical.

*unfolds plastic chair* I will be waiting.
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