First Try

The Star ★

Lay's POV

I parked the car infront of a house.

"We're here," I said 

I heard no response and decided to look at her. I saw her sleeping, laying her head on her seat.

She looks so peaceful and beautiful too.

I didn't notice myself staring at her. For a few minutes I was like that.

If only she belongs to me.

"Tae....... can you....... love....... me?" I said softly 

"Can you........ give me......... a chance?" 

"I promise to make you happy." 

I move closer and closer  to her

My lips was an inch apart from hers.

I closed my eyes and was about to kiss her but then I recalled her sweet smile when I gave her that breakfast.

She was so happy back then. I don't want to break her trust that she gave me.

I tried to control myself from the urge to kiss her.

I moved backward into my seat.

I lay my whole back into my seat, closed my eyes and sighed deeply.

Taeyeon's POV

I felt that Lay parked the car but I didn't want to wake up.

I just waited for him to wake me up.

But then I heard him saying all those words.

"Love..............
Chance.............
I Promise............ 
..............Can you?"

It's getting hard to pretend that I'm still sleeping

I can feel his lips, it was brushing mine. 

But as he was about to kiss me he withdrawed. I heared his deep sigh.

I pretended that I just woke up. I stretch my hands up high.

I saw him laying his whole back and the back of his head on his seat with his arms covering his closed eyes.

"What's wrong?" I pretended  to not know anything

"Nothing" he said looking directly into my eyes

I just smiled to him

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parvitasari #1
Chapter 28: Even i'm not layeon shipper, but i love your story.. And this rare couple is so cuteeeee.. Congrats and thank you for finishing this wonderful story..
yehet-ohorat
#2
Chapter 21: Love this story! Please update, it's really good :)
rina_takashi
#3
Chapter 21: kekkeke....
so sweet !!!!!!!!
ladykirana
#4
Chapter 15: they did not kiss right? why??!! hehehe^^ hwaiting!
ladykirana
#5
Chapter 14: is lay ok? he is sick right? hwaiting !! ^^
ladykirana
#6
Chapter 13: new reader! i like this story! rare couple but i love it! hwaiting author-nim!
mati12 #7
The start is so good already :) Can't wait to read the rest!
allaibeb #8
Chapter 8: Update soon Author-nim !!! I really love this story ^^
LayTae couple is so rare...that's why I'm glad tis is a LayTae fanfic ^^
seobie-_-
#9
Chapter 3: Wow its good update soon plz! Sorry 4 the bad comment :)