Raindrops

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Annyeong Haseyo~~~

Kyaahhh~~ my first story here in AFF. *^_^*

I first posted this on watty. But I'm reposting it here :)

I hope you like this one shot.

Please do comment, constructive criticisms are always welcome so that I can improve ^_^

But first I want to thank RuiShi~nim for being the spark that gave me this plot.

For those who don't know RuiShi~nim's stories, you better check it  out. They're one of the best! ^_^

Kamsahamnida *bows*

Enjoy Reading.

Foreword

"Because every time it rains, I start to feel that I'm alone. That there's no one who'll comfort me when I need it the most. And the sad part of it, even if I told my friends that I've moved on, can't stop myself and remember that day 3 years ago. The day when my love  for the rain vanished.

 

You might want to ask what happened 3 years ago. I might as well share it to you.

 

Here goes nothing."

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hyukniss #1
Chapter 1: Jiyong i really want to punch your face hard!! youu jiyong</3 this is so heartbreaking!
ryouchi_chan #2
Chapter 1: sequel pleassseeeeee!!!!!!!!!!
pretibem #3
Please do announce if u decide to really make a sequel coz i would really love to read it..

Btw, flawless writing! Keep it up
pretibem #4
Chapter 1: Authornim, please do a sequel!!!


If jiyong could love someone else, just let dara be happy with or without another guy.. Thanks
iamsasharra #5
Chapter 1: I definitely agree that you need to have sequel.. Jeez! Jiyong being two timer is a no no.. Let TOP or YB get Dara and marry her.. Hohoh! My apple heart might hurt but I really hate jiyong being bastard.. Aish!
lightning_TabiSan #6
Chapter 1: I agree, definitely a sequel!

Oh, goody, Dara must find her own happiness if not with GD at least with some worthy man!

I cried a river, how could Jiyong cheat on her!!!

Yahhh. sequel juseyo :)
LIRPAevolDARAGON #7
waahhhhhh... this story needs some sequel!!!
jepoknat #8
Chapter 1: This needs a sequel!!!
sujukat #9
Chapter 1: please make a sequel! hehe..this is nicely written!

i do hope you make a sequel..i want dara to be happy..and ji to be himself..do whatever he wants..lol...please do make a sequel^^ thanks for this fic!
RuiShi #10
Chapter 1: Hello, Miss_Prei!!! First of all, THANK YOU!!! ^__^ That was really sweet of you. I'm glad I sparked the writer within you to come out and post something here on AFF! "Angsty" plots are very tricky because at some point in the story, you have to make your reader feel the pain of your character. And you didn't fail on that. When he said the words, "I Love Her"...i literally got my pillow and strangled it. Yup, affected much! kekeke Sometimes its the simple words that hurt. And I could somehow picture Dara not being able to cry from shock.

I do hope you continue this story! Or maybe post another as a sequel. ^__^ The tricky part here in AFF is...once you start posting, you can never seem to stop. ^__^ (I'd credit Pringles for that! haha) I hope you write some more! Fighting! (^__^) Hengsho! And THANK YOU again and again and again! <bow>
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