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Amusement Park Adventure

I really want your opinion on this.

 

 

Voting closed on 11th Nov (Malaysia Time)

 

I already worked out the drafts. I just want you guys' opinion on this thing, cause I don't want to dissapoint anyone T_T

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XiaoShixun #1
Chapter 1: Lol it reminds me of when I lost a.k.a run around by myself at an amusement park
KpopLover61 #2
Chapter 1: "My glitter is one of a kind" said GD
Hahahahhahahahahha! Yessir! I'm one of a kind~
SmileSehun #3
Chapter 1: HAHAJA OMG I LOVE THIS.
hasanaheart #4
Chapter 1: I pitty on Suho and Kris >.<" the kids are cute. the story is good. love it!^^
MinseokMermaid #5
Chapter 1: ARE YOU KIDDING ME ITS JUST SO BEYOND I JUST ASDFGHJKL TOOOOOOOOOOO CUTEEEEEEEEEEEEE
ainurhakim #6
Chapter 1: Idk why but i am laughing so frkn damn hard at luhans part HAHAHAHAHAHA OMG XD
mihunssi #7
Chapter 3: Actually, it's okay if it's not crack. I understand. I mean if it's crack...it's ery awkward because they were like...not good with each other. XD
maymeihua_ #8
Chapter 1: i miss this fanfic<333 babyexooooo
mihunssi #9
Chapter 1: I was laughing at Luhan at first because he shouted at the young lady then chokes on a bug. Then the problems numero spanish numbers XD then Yixing love Barney's and how Sehun address Barney as Big purble lizard XD and Luhan choked on a bug again XD and ofcourse....Yixing's dream XD
MrsStyles #10
Chapter 1: OMO!!! this is too cute!!! I love it author nim!!! Ur a really great author and you maked me laughed sooo hard! XD
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