Chapter 1

Exo Thriller Series: The Wrong Guy
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Narrator POV

 

 

 

  Kris got off work that night around 9pm. He was tired from the strenuous work that messed with his body. Outside of that,  he was one of the best mechanics in his job. Many clients come to the car shop to receive his service, mainly women.  They love the best of both services he gives: good looks and good handy car service.

Kris was already packing his tools into his portable kit as one of his coworkers, Kai, tried his hardest to bribe the too mellow Kris out to the local bar that night.

"Dude seriously all you do is work and sleep. How do you expect us to hang when you live like you have an invisible marriage. Let up some will you? Come out tonight and have a few drinks with the guys. I promise they're all on me?" Kai patted his shoulder lightly.

 "I'm sorry bro but my arms are killing me after taking huge engines out of 12 cars. I just want to go home and relax."

Kai squinted his eyes in a naughty way.

"Tch. So what? You're gonna have one of your plastic dolls massage your back for you?"

"Yah! Who told you I had a freaking doll in my house? You've never been invited so what do you know?"  Kris laughed as he playfully grabbed Kai by his collar.

"Tch. doll. You're too much kai, seriously." Kris said as he made his way to his 1980 Chevy truck.
 

"Yeah?! Well this is what happens when you don't invite your friends over. They over-think stuff!" Kai hollered over the engine of Kris' car as it rode off onto the midnight road.
 

Five minutes into his drive towards home, Kris stopped at the deserted local gas station and picked up a couple of

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rowgentlydownurdream
#1
Chapter 2: ...whoa. poor kris! the police were complete idiots. ha ha ha.
you managed to surprise me again. that is amazing. give me some of your brain please! i want this ability of yours!
berryberrystrawberry #2
Chapter 2: This was actually really good!! I never expected the last part haha I do hope the killer won't get away though
nemosmknimh
#3
Chapter 2: Poor Kris. .....
I wonder what happens to that killer
missteriosa_xo
#4
Chapter 2: Omg!...
I can't believe they just shot him like that lol.
Poor Kris :(
You should do another one!
amhemmelstern
#5
Chapter 2: So after I read this, I was like---------> (O.O)'

Three words to describe this chapter...
Short.
Intense.
Unexpected.

I seriously didn't expect that it would turn out this way. The gay part and the whole wrong-guy-kris-your-dead-and-drowning-in-your-own-blood ending. The SWAT team wouldn't be let off that easy. lol. constitutional violations.

This story is unusual and interesting, especially for people who want to break free from the trend of HS romance!!!!! :) lol. Hope to read more from you, dear author!!
nix123 #6
Chapter 2: I'm so going to sue the SWAT team for killing a nice and handsome guy! They could have checked! I swear if the SWAT team in your story is real so many innocent people would have died. I can't wait for the next one! (Man I sound like a psycho that likes to read about people being killed.)
b2stie #7
Chapter 2: I'm so effing gonna kill and sue the SWAT team for killing kris! Kris could be one of the suspect but they had no right to shoot kris because although kris had a bat and threaten to kill them, he did not initiate any moves! I'm so angry! I'm gonna seriously just jump in your story and fix everything lol! Haha i wish *gets bricked in the head by you* Good job though author :)
Yeoreum
#8
Chapter 2: NO YOU DID NOT JUST KILL KRIS OPPA AND LEAVE THAT GAY KILLER ALIVE... I DON'T EVEN KNOW IF I AM GOING TO SUBSCRIBE ALL BECAUSE THE SWAT TEAM DIDN'T EVEN CHECK FIRST.. JUST RESPONDED TO A OLD FART NEXT DOOR WHO COULD HAVE BEEN LYING ABOUT OPPA..
missteriosa_xo
#9
Chapter 1: Ooo mysterious~, lol.
I like the first chapter!
I'm totally looking forward to
what comes next :)
Hope you're having lots of creative
ideas! <3
amhemmelstern
#10
Chapter 1: Wow. This is something new!
I mean, you're writing in a different genre.
I feel like I just read a "prologue" and not a "chapter" if you get what I mean.
You've given us little, merely a taste of some sorts, and now the curiosity is killing me!!!!
I think this is gonna be wickedly good!!!