the bittersweet between my teeth

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whenever it rains, you will think of her.

 

 

 

 

Foreword

a/n: ok, this is a complete mess, probably the weirdest, most experimental thing i've ever written? entirely in present participle and second person. entry for the Welcome To Our Dream Writing Contest (i just realized they do not accept "you" fics. BUT THIS IS SECOND PERSON, HOPEFULLY THAT MAKES A DIFFERENCE /MENTAL BREAKDOWN) using the prompt:

"Hope is the thing with feathers that perches in the soul and sings the tune without the words and never stops at all"  - Emily Dickinson

 

 

 

for regrets and regretting.

for that day we must learn to hold on, let go, and move forward all at once.

 

 

 

 

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Krystalocked #1
Chapter 1: Rainy today in where I live. I The first thing came into my mind while catching raindrops was this story. "Whenever it rains, you will think of her." So I'm here to thank again. Thank you for making simpliest things more meaningful.
Krystalocked #2
Chapter 1: Masterpiece. Gosh. I'm speechless. That's really incredible. Feelings. Damn, your stories always make my heart flutter.
thepurplzebra #3
Chapter 1: Wow. Just wow. This is one of the most beautiful pieces of writing I have ever read. Truly gorgeous artwork. So, so beautiful. I am speechless... Just... ugh.. so... good.. Seriously, I am bowing down to you. Thank you for writing this
swabluu #4
Chapter 1: YOUR WRITING MAKES ME SAD WHY IS IT SO PERFECT
eseech #5
Chapter 1: ffffffuuuuu i haven't read your writing in awhile ;A;

but oh god everything about this PLS CONTAIN YOUR GODLINESS SAPPHY PLS HIDE IT SOMEWHERE ELSE THIS IS TOO BEAUTIFUL as usual the way you write about everything and how normal things seem so beautiful and how relatable you make everything just askjdhasdkjahakjs ;A; especially watching strangers from the bus and wondering about their lives DO YOU KNOW WHAT WE ALL DO SAPPHY HAVE YOU SEEN IN OUR BRAINS ASKJHASJKSAHJ but the whole theme of strangers and bus stops and your beautiful third person it's all too much askjasdhkjashj I REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS ;A; I love all the habits you always give your characters (counting steps to and from places, smudged eyeliner because of an unsteady hand, mind wondering on bus stops) and how they're really simple but just make you feel all warm when you read about it. your writing is really beautiful <3

good luck sapphy! <3
eriestar #6
I SHIP THEM I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE OMG CRY
devilgirlmaria #7
Chapter 1: BEAUTIFUL AS ALWAYS DEAR BEAUTIFUL AS ALWAYS :)
ethereals #8
Woah, Sapphy writing in the very last minute, hahahaha.

#congratsforyourwin

HAHAHAHAHA.
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