Life Is Beautiful

Description

When Ahn Jaehyo gets a phonecall from his mother, his whole life turns upside down.

 

His sister, his baby sister, has cancer.

 

He will have to learn how to be strong for her, even when it kills him to see someone so full of life become so empty.

 

Could he, with the help of the other memebers of Block B, show this girl that life is beautiful, and to enjoy every moment of it?

 

 

 

 

Foreword

"It's not fair, why her?!"
 
Jaehyo stands in front of the alter of the random church he had found, swaying back and forth, a bottle of Jack in his hand. He was soaking wet from the rain outside, but he couldn't care less. All he could care about, really, was yelling at the statue of Jesus on the Cross, his words coming out slurred in his drunken state. It wasn't fair, he thought as a bolt of lightening cracks outside, followed by a boom of thunder.
 
Why did it have to be her, his baby sister? Why could it have not been him? The world didn't need him, he decides as he drinks heavily from the bottle, nearly falling over; the world sure as hell needed her. It needed her smile, her love, her laughter. Why did it have to be her?
 
Jaehyo throws his nearly empty bottle against the church wall, a sob racking his body as the bottle shatters in time with another lightening strike. Tears were running freely down his face as he fell slowly, defeated, to his knees. It was there, in that church alone, drunken and scared, did Jaehyo pray for the first time in his life.
 
What more could he lose?
 
 
 
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The amazing person who did my poster and background for me~!:
 

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_kkaebsong_ #1
I can't wait for it!
-stargazer
#2
Okay, so, here are just my opinions:
1. The title should be "Life is Beautiful" instead of "Life Is Beautiful". Not all the words in a title are meant to be capitalized.
2. This isn't that important- but I don't think you should change the color of the words in the description. Just bold it or italic it for emphasis. I mean, it's all right to use colors but it'd be cool if you just leave the fanfic in black and white and only use italics or bolding in the fanfic.

Other than the two points, I think it's quite cool. The foreword's okay- I like the description of Jaehyo drunk and upset. Also, it's "lightning", not "lightening". I sincerely look forward to see how this fanfic develops in future.
Willow3883
#3
Well, this look nice... and I think my heart and my eyes would like this I can anticipate my own sea of tears. But ..It's beautifil. I'm looking forward :)
Chr0meHearts
#4
It's beautiful (':

I'm looking forward to crying all over the place. Kekeke~