I can't wait for it!

Okay, so, here are just my opinions:
1. The title should be "Life is Beautiful" instead of "Life Is Beautiful". Not all the words in a title are meant to be capitalized.
2. This isn't that important- but I don't think you should change the color of the words in the description. Just bold it or italic it for emphasis. I mean, it's all right to use colors but it'd be cool if you just leave the fanfic in black and white and only use italics or bolding in the fanfic.

Other than the two points, I think it's quite cool. The foreword's okay- I like the description of Jaehyo drunk and upset. Also, it's "lightning", not "lightening". I sincerely look forward to see how this fanfic develops in future.

Well, this look nice... and I think my heart and my eyes would like this I can anticipate my own sea of tears. But ..It's beautifil. I'm looking forward :)

It's beautiful (':

I'm looking forward to crying all over the place. Kekeke~