Chapter 13: very cute story. I liked the ugly shirt well outfit you described for Kyuhyuns first date and Hyukjae's irritation. lol
The only thing that sort of got to me was the fact that Hyuk was being ordered around like he wasn't the owner of his place. But still all in all sweet story. :)
Chapter 13: Some constructive criticism, get a beta reader. The story was good but the grammar could have been better. I'm available if u need me to fix it
Chapter 13: end already....
glad hyukjae can chase after his dream and kyu and hyukjae finally together...
btw are you not going to make epilogue? I want to see how heechul's reaction when his son told him they have boyfriend...
Chapter 13: I saw the notification and was shocked at the fact that I hadn't read this since chapter 8 .___. WTH I was really expecting to read the next chapters, how did I miss them?!
But Oh well, I've read them c: I'm glad the Hyuk got to fulfill his dream along with Kyu<33 I would have loved to see Heechul's reaction to meeting his son's partners though xD
Good story <33
Chapter 13: Oh i'm still feeling quite shock that it was the last chapt of this story,even when you have said before..i think i just don't wanna this story end soon,well i admited to you i've already have a few plot in my mind hihihi.. >.<
But its a nice ending,i'm happy for them,especially hyukjae,kyu was done so much and everything the best for him.oh,real love was found you once,so lucky you,hyuk!
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