Love is a losing game

Description

Brothers.


Family.

Fanservice.

Doubts.

Touches.

Smiles.

Tears.

And I love you.

 

Foreword

Top's eyes light up as he's talking.

"And then, Jiyong and I ..." He looks at Daesung, who's simply staring off into space.

"Yah! Are you even listening to me?" He lets out as he gives a soft nudge at the boy. The latter looks up and flashes a smile.

"Yes, yes. Jiyong this, Jiyong that. If you miss him that much, then what are you still doing here?" He scoffs. The smile disappears, and he resumes to the staring off.

"Daesungie... You know it's not like that between us," the oldest sighs.

"I know, I know. You only have eyes for me," Daesung answers. He's still not looking at his hyung, and Top is wondering whether the youngest even has a clue as to what he means to him.

"Good boy," he smirks. 

 

 


 

 

Written by Daengel and IPaintMyselfBlue.

 

 

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MintFlavouredVanilla
#1
Chapter 2: Hi! Are you ready for (yet again) another way too long comment? I really should stop leaving these kind of comments lol.
So about Chapter one: I have to say it started of pretty nice, I love teasing between lovers, haha. Does that make me sound weird? It does, doesn't it? *sighs* Poor Daesung though, trying so hard to say how he feels, and just not getting the words out. Poor thing. Then there's the last line. Perfect, just perfect.
About Chapter two: This chapter makes the title quite obvious. They're playing each other really, even though I like how they're teasing one another constantly, I get this bad feeling this isn't going to go the way I'd like it to. The fact Daesung can't say the actual words will definitely blow up, I think. Plus obviously neither of them wants to 'lose' this game, I doubt if Top's actually going to admit defeat. Oh, and again; killer ending, just how I like it. The only thing I like more is the fact that this story has a very naughty Daesung. That, I love.
Anyway, I loved every word of it! Thanks for writing, can't wait for the next update! <3
diamondgurl88
#2
Chapter 2: Ugh.
Stop teasing already! >\\\<
Daesung since when did you become a naughty y daesung? LOL. Just how TOP liked it.

I really cant wait for the next chapter!
Czseoul #3
Chapter 2: Such a tease!!! Plz update soon xD
Chin-ae #4
Chapter 2: IIIIIIIIIIIIIIII like it! Please update soon! ^^
Oh, and I agree with the comment below! GIVE IN TOP! GIVE. IN.
Don't fight the y y kang :o
ILikeRainyWeather
#5
Chapter 2: SO MUCH TEASING - I - I - I CAN'T! OwO
Waaaah TOP, please surrender :p lol
Thanks for writing! It's awesome, please update soon!
Michi-Dae
#6
Chapter 1: Uhummmm show him right?!?! Ok I stopped! Bad dirty mind of mine! I loveeed it! Please update! <3
Bunny9129
#7
Chapter 1: Beautiful.... The last sentence!!! You've never failed to satisfy me with your words....thank you!! I'm waiting for the update
AniDarckSugaR
#8
Chapter 1: OMG this is so cool XDD
"I expect you to show me" that was awesome *_*
Please update soon <3
AniDarckSugaR
#9
Wao this looks interesting o_o
ILikeRainyWeather
#10
Chapter 1: Awww 'uri Daesungie' wanted to say 'I love you' back, right? Hahahaha I literally tried it :p "I" and then I placed my tongue on my bottom lip, and I figured that was for pronouncing the "l", right? Hahhaa I'm stupid, I'm sorry :p

MOAR TEASING! ;D Teasing is fun, unless you do it to your readers, and you leave them hanging when stuff's about to go down :p lol

Naaah just joking, well done! Fighting with the next chapter!