Bad People Don't Deserve to Live

Description

"I was kidnapped when I was 16 it changed me forever. I didn't have the chance to save my life or the lives of the one's I loved. Now is my chance to redeem myself."

Foreword

Ray Kim (OC) (24) – Edgy-look cool mysterious bold girl that has a hot temper she is trained in combat. Will do anything to protect the one’s she loves at any means necessary. (More reviled later) 

Yang Seung Ho (25) – cool, collective, handsome and has a little sister that he loves to death and will do anything for her. (More reviled later)

Choi Dae Hyun (OC) (30) - “works” with Ray. Kind protective, loyal, and helpful, cute, charming, second best to Doo Joon (more reviled later)

Seung Ho’s little sister (OC) (16) – curious, sweet, caring, beautiful, loves Seung Ho.  Scared and timid but is very loyal and protective of one’s she loves (more reveled later)

Yoon Doo Joon (26) – evil gets what he wants. Rich beyond belief. Mysterious, dark and y will do anything to keep his life the way he wants (more reveled later)

Minor- Beast

Italicized- thought

Bold- emphases

Bold and underlined- important

(Censored cussing i.e. - sh*t)

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Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters Sorry if anybody is offended that Doo Joon is the bad guy. Thought that this y man would be the perfect person for it ^^ I guess MBLEAST leaders are going to be in it! THEY ARE SO Y! Okay so this is my second fanfic and I’m gong to try to update better on this one so wish me luck^^.  The chapters are going to be in Ray’s point of view (p.o.v.) but I’m still not 100% on that so if you see a different p.o.v. please understand^^ If anything is confusing you are more than welcomed to comment and help me with my mistakes ^^ thank you

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U-Kissluva
#1
@asnsa123 - thanks soooo much! YAY MY FIRST COMMENT! don't be afraid to suggest stuff! ^^<br />
asnsa123 #2
luv ur story , i get too excited when u update , and dont worry nothings confusing ur story is just fine ^^