That Cherry Blossom.

Description

"Hey Junhong. What's your dream?"
 
The younger boy hesitated.
 
 "To be happy."

Foreword

A cherry blossom tree stood in front of Yongguk's view. The petals slowly fell, one by one delicately onto the ground beneath him as he listened to the still and sullen silence. Yongguk remembered what he said.
 
"Hey Junhong. What's your dream?"
 
The younger boy hesitated.
 
 "To be happy."
 
If only he had been there for Zelo. If only he had come to Zelo at the right time to make everything better for him.
 
Yongguk was popular, friendly and social.
 
Zelo was an outcast, unfriendly and refused to talk to anyone.
 
No one understood why, until Yongguk stepped into his life.
 
A story request from TheGlitterWorld.
 
That Cherry Blossom.
 
Characters: Yongguk and Zelo. (Himchan and Jongup as recurring characters.)
 
Type: Two-Shot.
 
Genre: Angst, Tragedy.
 
Started: 21/06/13 (10:30am GMT)
 
Completed: 09/09/13 (01:48am GMT)
 
Contains minor violence and strong language - I had to split the story into a Two-Shot due to its length. Keep in mind that this is a BangLo fanfic!!
 
Word Count : 23,021
 
Constructive criticism is always expected - I'm ready for feedback whether it was good or not, whether you liked it or not - whatsoever.
 
So please enjoy! ^-^
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jasmine751 #1
Chapter 2: Yes, you made me cry. It was so beautifully written. I remember reading a book called An Invisible Thread, which is a true story and there was one part where they said if you're going to be there for them, you have to be there for them all the way to the end.
Mychal #2
Chapter 2: Came across this again after reading it almost two years ago. (I think my old comment is still there :P)
This story hits me right in the feelz and as I was reading this wonderful story, I felt nostalgic. :)
In my opinion, this is the best BangLo story I've ever read :D
Keep up the good work!!
starlit_vip_melody #3
I DIDNT READ THE DESCRIPTION I DONT LIKE THESE KINDS OF STORIES I WASNT EXPECTING THIS I CANT STOP CRYING
minakwon38 #4
Chapter 2: I just found this great ff and suddenly crying so hard (I'm trying to ease the pain reading this beautiful, sad stories) thanks author.
KpopSweetart #5
Chapter 2: Zelo, TT.TT
water_lilly #6
Chapter 2: F u. U made me crey ;____;
I will attack you in school tomorrow.

Seriously I love that metaphor at the end!! I really envy your writing… why Stephanie!! Why do you write so beautifully???!!
water_lilly #7
Chapter 1: To sleep or read part 2? WELL I GUESS I'LL READ PART TWO BECAUSE I HAVE TO KNOWWWWW!!!!
baperfectsj #8
Chapter 2: It's 2:30am and I'm crying so hard right now.... It hurts to see what junhong went through and I've read similar stories to yours so I kinda knew what was gonna happen but IT STILL HURTS ALL THE SAME. You wrote Junhong's feelings well and I like how Yongguk started befriending Junhong and helped him and in the end love him. Junhong's parents are so ugh Yongguk had to be the one to save Junhong. I think I cried even worst when Yongguk started talking about Himchan since... my bias is Himchan so... Kinda guessed Yongguk had something going on with Himchan though when Junhong noticed that there was a 6th member of SC on the wall.
"I'll go up to that rooftop to think of Himchan, and I'll come here to think of you Zelo" why do I like this sentence so much?
You have successfully killed my two OTPs ;;;;; anyway this was beautifully written and I love this.
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