BoyFriends??

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My 1st time writing story in here...Not very creative in writing... But still hopping that you guys could support me..

Poster credit: superseoul11 & SuperGirl Poster Request Shop

Foreword

What happen when you just wake up from a coma and some guy just appeared in front of you as your boyfriends?? You could remember all your families members and your friends but no memory of them?? Yet they know you perfectly well as though they have been always by your side... Just what has happened??

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Hyori_Rain #1
This...was so ADORABLE! Oh my God, it reminds me of a really cute KBS Drama that's about to evolve into something so much more. At first, I was turned off by how in-sync Boyfriend's dialogue was, and how all six were her boyfriends, but then when they started introducing themselves, their youth kind of explained that. I got this vibe that they more-so want to be her boyfriend, rather than actually being her boyfriend, if you get what I mean. I was going to critique this fic a lot when I read the first chapter, but as I read the second chapter, you actually improved on a lot of the points I was going to mention. I would still say to work on the grammar a bit more, and really take advantage of the script concept that you're using. I think that you could really make this work to your advantage, especially since, like I said before, this fic gives off a very strong drama vibe. I will most definitely be looking forward to more from you, and I hope you have a good day. :)
sofmin #2
im older than minwoo by 1 one !!!! my birthday 30 july !!!<br />
btw update !!!!<br />
sofmin #3
BOYFRIEND ??? wait...wait...wait....is this boy group BOYFRIED ??? kwangmin , minwoo , youngmin , jeongmin , donghyun n hyunseung ??? if it yes !!!!! i cant wait 2 read it !!!!
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