First Love

Description

Hello! This is my first story based on first love. I'm also accepting Story covers too. Feel free to send me a cover for my fanfic. ^_^

 

Characters::

Jang Dongwoo

Age: 24

Dongwoo is a very nice guy who always cared for his girlfriend and his family. He comes from a rich family that had high expectations. There family hated low life people. But what if Dongwoo falls in love with a low life girl?

 

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Kim Seuk Hye

Age:22

Seuk Hye is a sweet but also a serious girl. There was no one she ever loved because she was rasied in a oraphanage. She was adpoted when she was young. She owns a a little cafe down the street where she lived. Seuk Hye's adooption parents were rich and also had a son named Kim Myungsoo. 

 

Park Jiyeon

Age: 23

Jiyeon is Dongwoo's girlfriend. She never smiles or laugh. Since Dongwoo they been dating for 5 years she wanted to get married with him. But what if Dongwoo find someone else he wants to marry?

 

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Kim Myungsoo

Age:23

Myungsoo is Seuk Hye's brother. Since his parents are getting older day by day they live in a little apartment where Seuk Hye pays rent. His family decide to adopt Seuk Hye because when his parents leave the world there will be his sister next to his side.  He is also Jiyeon's ex boyfriend.

 

 

 

 

 

Foreword

"Seuk Hye. I found another guy for blind dates." Myungsoo said to me. "Why? You think i can't get guys? Yah. I can find guys i just choose not to." I said back to him. "I was just trying to help you get married." Esh. "I'll be leaving to open my cafe now. Come later to bring some bread to mom and dad."  I said and then left.

 

*Door Opens*

"Excuse me. How much would you sell this shop for?" The customer asked me. "What? Who are you, and i'm not planning to sell my Cafe. Please leave." I said to him. When did i put a sign in front of the door saying for sell? "Sorry for not introducing myself first. I'm Jang Dongwoo. Me and my girlfriend wants to buy this shop from you. Why don't you just  name a price." He said trying to sound cool. "A price? Sure why not. How about your life your girlfriends life, your house, all your bank money, everything in your house. Can you give it to me?" I said to him. Right then a girl walked in. "Jang Dongwoo. Don't waste time talking to her." I guess it was his girlfriend. Right then Myungsoo walked in. "Seuk Hye. Mom told you to close the shop early and buy a cake to celebrate dad's birthday." We all turned and looked at Myungsoo. "Myungsoo?" Said the customers girlfriend. "Oh. Jiyeon, Why are you here? The shop sign is not even open yet. Ah~ you're here with you new boyfriend huh? Why are you guys here?" Myungsoo knows these people? "Seems like you and that girl are related. Name me a price and i'll buy the cafe." Said that DongWoo guy. "Excuse me. We never plan on selling this shop. Are you crazy? Who said you can just randomly walk in and buy a cafe that's not even for sale." Myunsoo replied to him. "Yah. Just let him be. Crazy people these days." I said to Myungsoo pulling his arm. "I'll take care of my customer. Hurry and take some bread home first. my employees will be here soon." I said to Myungsoo giving him bread and pushing him out the door. "Well then. I'll see you next time and please think about selling your shop. I'm willing to give you as much as you want." Dongwoo said to me and hold his girlfriends and walked out. Who does he think he is? Why is he doing all this stuff to get my cafe? Annoying. 

 

 

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I'm not sure how to write this story.I hope you guys will subscribe and comment and give me ideas. Don't forget to send in a Story cover.

 

 

 

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sijolie
#1
Myungyeon right? you can tag Myungyeon to get more subcribers
stacyberd #2
Myungyeon before subscribe?
namyeon
#3
wow i never read fanfic that jiyeon with dongwoo... really anticipate your story :)
hope you'll make myungyeon moment :)