How i review your story? 

Like this! 

Story Title[did it catch my attention?] : /5

Appearance[did the fanfic catch my attention?] : /10

Forewords[did the forwards make me want to continue reading?]: /10

Plot[was the plot cliché or was it interesting?] : /15

Characterization[can I understand which characters are who and understand their personalities?] : /10

Creativity/Originality[was the story interesting and creative?] : /10

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary[how educated are you in the English language?] :  /15

Flow[too fast or too slow?]: /10

Writing Style[good presentation and easy to read?] : /15

Rated Parts[were they good, bad etc]: /5

Overall Enjoyment[did I like reading it or was it a complete waste of time?] : /5

Total :  /100

if the marks exceed 100. That means I add some numbers to it!