(The purple words are my answers)

Story Title[did it catch my attention?] :  4/5

Yes it did but if you say like my favorite idol, then i can put it as 5/5.

Appearance[did the fanfic catch my attention?] : 10/10

It is so cute! The background suits the story!

Forewords[did the forwards make me want to continue reading?]: 7/10

Its not that exciting and also what we call overly cliche. which is a good thing because I'm not the type of reviewer who would like cliches :).

Plot[was the plot cliché or was it interesting?] : 12/15

It is interesting because. . . who wouldn't want to be in a fic show? But Some people might think its cliche.

Characterization[can I understand which characters are who and understand their personalities?] : 8 /10

One of the character, Ahn Cess, I don't understand her personality at first because it somehow mixed with shy, snobby(sorry but I have to say whatever is on my heart) and somehow which make me feel as if she is mixed personality type of person. You write about the others in a good way that make me feel that they are more easier to understand. You make the characters in the story appears equally and that  makes the applicants glad. So I have to give you a high score. ^_^

Creativity/Originality[was the story interesting and creative?] : 9/10

Yeah! Its like you want your fantasy to happen and you jot it down to make people enjoy themselves as well as youself. Its creative and the originality is like its from you,yourself.

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary[how educated are you in the English language?] : 12 /15

(Part 1) MC : How do you feel when you saw her?

It can't be her since the MC is talking about how Ahn Cess meets Taecyeon.

MC: How do you feel when you saw him? (Correct way)

Hmm.

   Dear newly arranged Couple. Welcome to "A week with my Idol". Today is your first day of meeting and you will have to move into your new house. Please go to this address. Your car is already away so you have to go there. 

Best wishes By A week with my Idol staff.

If you can, the last sentence like from, love or sincerely on the bottom on the right. Just to make it more simple. Plus, Italized the words to make it look like a letter. Above there is is the correct way.
 

Writing Style[good presentation and easy to read?] : 14/15

Yup ^_^. Its easy for me to read since your not using long paragraphs. Heck you type more better than me :(. Hhaha :D

Flow[too fast or too slow?]: 6/10

Its a good start but its a bit fast in the beginning but as the chapter increase, its getting better and better ^_^.

  Rated Parts[were they good, bad etc]: /5

Its a good thing because I'm not the type of person who can read rated since I'm young :).

Overall Enjoyment[did I like reading it or was it a complete waste of time?] : 4 /5

I like reading it because its so cute! And plus humor by Onew!! hehe..
 

Total :  91/100 (That an A score!! Congratlations!!)

I add five because you didn't have any rated parts :). Chukahae!! You got high score!. But don't get over excited because everybody has a long way to go. Improve more and re-read your story to get your story featured!. At any rates, please promote this. And congratulation plus thank you for being a customer. Hope you like it and good luck to your story! ^_^