congratulations!

congrats :)

Congrats!! :D

I read your story because it was the random feature of the day; it's a daily ritual of mine. Please know that this is my opinion and I don't intend to discourage you from writing or bash you.
Anyway, I liked the plot. It was nice and cute. I had just a few problems with it, though. At some parts, I felt that it was a bit too rushed and, therefore, I didn't feel much emotion for the story—like how Henry fell in love with her. I can't exactly put into words how I felt it was rushed. (OTL T-T I'm so sorry...).
In “Chapter 4: Where is she?” I noticed that the same lines were repeated again (the entire chapter text were repeated after the last line). I'm pretty sure you only made an honest mistake at that part (because it's really difficult to type in the editor) so I understand but I do hope you fix it.
I was quite confused at some scenes. Why would Megan's parents move in her dorm with her when they could've easily rented a hotel room or something and asked Megan to move there? Other questions like that are racing in my mind right now.
I keep saying negative things but I have to say that I was a bit surprised about Megan being adopted by her uncle (and though he's not all that important, I wish I could've at least seen him in a flashback chapter or something). I feel that he's the main antagonist of the story, aside from Mrs. Hwang, so we definitely need more of him.
Though I keep saying all these things, I really like your story. The title really attracted me. Good job! I wish you all the best in your future writing ventures! Thanks for the 7 wonderful chapters!

congrats c:

Congratulations! :)

Chapter 7: Congratulations! :)

Congrats! ^^

Chapter 7: congrats for featured!