Hurt me all you want I'll still adore you ; just love me back before I go

Description

Hyukjae just recently learnt that he's suffering from cardiopathy ( heart disease) and his last wish is to make the person he  has been in love with  ever since their freshman year love him back; but how could he do that when the latter is as straight as a ruler and all he does is being a jerk to Hyukjae .

Foreword

'Donghae~ssi I love you ; I know I'm ugly and not worth anything but please just give me a chance ; just one ' Hyuk said with pleading eyes for the upnth time already

'you ugly piece of ; dont you ing understand YOU disgust me ' Donghae said feeling disgusted by the other's feelings then walked away leaving the other with so much hurt reflecting on his eyes .

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This Story is for 

Seoul Lost+Found [WRITING CONTEST]

theme : high school 

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/421138/seoul-lost-found-writing-contest-contest-donghae-eunhae-eunhyuk-haehyuk-seoullostandfound

 

Author's Thoughts
YunaJeong
Ill update as soon as Ill finish the exams so i can give you my best .
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lolitta #1
it's really sad how this story was really short that it felt lacking so much more emotions and events ! you have a great pot line and potential !
why don't you think of re-writing it again but in a longer more detailed version ? i think that would be so cool
triciaanne #2
Chapter 6: Yeaaah! Please make a sequel d(^_^)b
kikieunhae #3
Chapter 5: glad they are together now!!!
i reallu loved reading this fic so...thanKYU ^^
daya219 #4
Chapter 6: I love your plot story but i felt that something was missing i know it was for the contest so you couldnt do it longer but i would love to read a pre sequel =)
de_cieluv #5
Chapter 6: Awwww.... They have kid.... >_< I want sequel as long as its happy ending and eunhae tagged on it >_<
cloudye0705 #6
Chapter 6: Simple stry and love it,,
Maybe you can make it better with using paragraph,,that's make your readers to won't get confused,,
Ladyghai #7
Chapter 5: I really like the story line, but next time when you write one try to be more descriptive and use some paragraphs :) but this story is so cute :)
0-0anon0-0 #8
Chapter 6: Aww, the story line was really sweet. For your first story this is actually pretty good. I have one suggestion though, I hope in the future with your writing you'll be a little more descriptive, since this story seemed to jump from one place to another. Your story was cute. Good job, thank you author-nim! :D
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