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hi guys!!!

this is my first time writing a fic so please bear with me...

and also i do not own the original story i only saw this in youtube and got inpired to right a daragon version

i do not own the story line and  the characters in this fic

so please write some comments and feel free to critie my work...LOL...

by the way this will be a short story so ill update the next chapter tomorrow??

Foreword

by the way... please do subscribe okay???

 

although this will be a short story i will still appriciate it if youll subscribe and comment....

 

thanks!!!!

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inakuyon #1
love it,although it a sad story....
water_lilly
#2
WOW... That... it's beautiful~
A great story, teared up a minute there :D
kloyola
#3
Nice story, it was a very sad story. I almost cried..thanks for sharing this...Kamsahamnida!
alienappler
#4
gaaaaaaaaaaah~ i love the story. huhu. too sad jiyong goes offline :( nice story :)
Lalain3
#5
my hair stands up after reading the ending...yay creepy
kathypufi #6
aaaww..that was creepy... :( and sad :( but the story is nice
kitchi
#7
I think you made my heart stop for a bit there. This.. Matches my theme so well today, it just completes it.<br />
Really sweet. But really creepy. But yeah. Really sweet. RIP Bear-Ji~ T_T
kristinamay17 #8
Scary but sweet... I just had to look twice at my Teddy bear before commenting... Hahahahaha...
Mahzy19 #9
Im crying cant help it huhu it hurts so bad huhu,
ItssCheska #10
Awww.. Very nice story =)<br />
i was crying while reading this :'((