Chapter 4: Oh look I found your story... Finally. Took me long enough to find it. I don't think you're doing bad, you're actualy doing well in writing it. Hopefully once you're less busy you update again. Wonder why other problems these two could face. Keep up the good work! ^^

Chapter 3: hi, wah kayaknya cuma salah paham aj soalx, sebenarnya mereka saling sayang satu sama lain.. cuma kekurangannya masing2 punya ego yang tinggi jadi tidak ada yg mau mulai menunjukkan perasaan masing2,... kykx mereka harus lebih jujur dgn perasaan mereka... keyber yg terbaik hehehe :))))

Chapter 3: finally.. Amber forgive Key.. so sweet this chapter:) U know to make it more drama u can add the third or fourth person in their love relationshipship:).. but don't make KeyBer breakup!! Fighting for the next chapter:)

Chapter 2: Key so sweet.. I think it's funny how Key call Amber baby ..owh.. so sweet but I agree why Amber reacted liked that!! Key shold apologize at first place because of his fault.. but Key seem to care too much when Amber hospitalized.. They need to tolerate towards each other feelings and situation.. Nice chapter:) can't wait for the next update fighting!!

Chapter 2: At first i think key was irresponsible, and he thinks he's right but he slept not getting ready when amber arrive. But during amber is in the hospital he seems to be doinh the right thing.

Chapter 1: what's happen next? o.O that's reality, this story just like what i've been going throught, everything that i need him to do or say is something that never coming from his act n lips. so,that's hurting n that's make me realize that maybe he just not the perfect one that i need for my lovelife, but another option is maybe i just need to tell what i really want from him coz,maybe he either no idea what i really wanted, or maybe we just the same person who always wait for another to come act first.. dunno it's hard to tell... let's see what u got! i'm waiting :))))))))))))))))))))

Chapter 1: fighting ! i think it'll be an interesting story

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Seems interesting story:) Please update,, Fighting:)

Like your story.. please update it.. ^^