Devil in the Details

Description

Do you sometimes have brief moments of madness? I sure do. This is what was produced by mine.

Foreword

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This is a story (that means boy x boy) so if you aren't ok with that, I suggest you leave now.

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This one-shot was written in a few hours, at about three in the morning. I felt strange and I couldn't sleep.

Read at your own risk.

Inspired by this painfully beautiful song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zaemmau7O6o

I suggest you listen to it before reading, perhaps the story would make more sense.

Please enjoy, and comment if you can? :3

 

PS. This chaotic writing style was inspired by a novel called Handmaid's Tale, but retains retains nothing of the plot.

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Liza_Blessedx2 #1
Chapter 1: I so need some fluffy Kyusung after reading this...!!! Exceptional writing authornim.
angelamy #2
Chapter 1: Woooow ... I feel weird (*_*) (!o~o!) Like really weird . the story is so good. Different. And makes me wonder. Does it happen to people?
COFFEE_addict08 #3
Chapter 1: Holy hell; this was so intense and rather... dark.
I've never read anything like this before; and now I feel as if I'm second guessing my entire life, haha.
You did a really great job on this style of writing! Though now I feel as if I need to go read some happy KyuSung or something. :P
ilovesungyeollie #4
Chapter 1: Waah.. this was.. so pretty ^^ i love these types of fics~ it delves into the soul~ hihi
else07 #5
Chapter 1: It was... Wah.
I didn't know what to expect, and I see, it is indeed difficult to describe into words. ^^
It was a bit odd, but beautiful. The beginning sounds almost like a poem. You conveyed the fact that Yesung saw things differently quite well, and I strangely related to him.
Although his apparent madness is worrisome. It seems as though work is draining him and making him go insane... =(

This story was deep, and it stirred awake many thinking patterns within me, such as how I handled life, the complicated subject which is perception, how the mind sometimes works almost independently and we feel as if we were trapped inside our own mind and looking at ourselves from a third-person perspective. I like thinking about things like those, because it's important in life to comprehend oneself. I'm my own subject of study. X)

So you wrote that on a madness surge ? Well, I'd say you were in a particular state (not in a bad way), making you write this story with that huge... Err... Spiritual (?) side.

Thank you for sharing, it pleasantly surprised me and I really liked it.
=)
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