That Knock
Description
He steadied himself, both feet set on the empty blue milk crate. In front of him was a looped rope - tight, thick and rough. He took his final glance around the room with a pair of despairing eyes as he allowed a vexatious bead of tear to journey down his right cheek, then dropping short, absorbed into the cotton wool of his shirt's collar. Instant happy memories came flashing in front of his eyes. The laughter, the warmth, the moments… he'll miss this place.
Foreword
Annyeong! It’s --DaeTokki here with a Two-Shot (It's actually a 4.5k ONE-SHOT! *Cue B.A.P's One Shot* LOL)
Please criticise this Two-Shot as much as possible so I can improve on my next one ^^
This was originally for my English journey creative writing story but I soon exceeded the 1000 word limit so… I decided to post up my extended version, but because of it's current length, I think I may put it as a Two Shot. Oh well.
Please enjoy! :)
(Check out my other one-shot featuring Jung Daehyun, Spotlight)
--DaeTokki
[Disclaimers: This is a work of fan fiction. Names, characters, and places are products of the author's imagination, or, if real, are used fictionally.]
Text copyright © 2013 by --DaeTokki
Poster (and background) © 2013 by ♪♪♂♥♀♪♪_Musical Rain Ideas and Graphics_♪♪♀♥♂♪♪
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First Edition May 2013
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