ur story is like a little oase in the middle of bangdae desert :') ur style is my favorite. now if only u can make this oase a little bigger.. 10k word bangdae shot would be nice /blinks excessively/
Chapter 1: It doesn't seem like English isn't your first language, because man, you know how to make a story that can really get someone deep in their soul. You really got me right in the feels, and that is a talent in it self. Please write more stories (>o<)
Chapter 1: You should have seen my face when I bumped into the last word saying 'wait. That's ALL?'
"...he asked for a place to stay.
...left side of Yongguk's bed to be exact" Oh hell, that was amazing.
I love this, my cravings for my precious BangDae love this too. The story is short, and it's good, because I think here's everything, nothing can be added.
Chapter 1: i think i knew the four letter words but im not sure and hope you will answer at the end(ya know? maybe i got prank from the writer or something). It was hard...everything was... when you stop yourself scrolling down to the bottom of page., and yeah you got me! TTTT a heartless daehyun how dare you said that special four letter words if you cant take it any longer! ummahurt!
Chapter 1: Wow that was ... really beautiful. I have to compose myself after reading through it.
I am quite a fast reader, but I like how the spaces between each paragraph kept me scrolling down, reducing my reading speed (it's extra the work scrolling since my lappy doesn't come with the rolling scroller) and taking this piece word by word. I have to say, I am, and have always been, a er for short yet concise writing, and this writing, your writing style, is just that. I love how your minimal use of words left things vague and more for my own imagination to flourish. It was just, enough. And there's something about limiting the usage of words that makes a piece really poetic and heartfelt. I really like your writing style. Oh, and of course, it helps that you write Bangdae too (since ... well my name is self-explanatory).
Anyway, welcome to the Bangdae's writers deck! *raises the glass* :D
Chapter 1: i'm still trying to find the right words to describe how i felt while reading this so please do excuse my incoherence.
this type of writing (short, unfinished sentences) is among my favourites and i've tried many times to write like this, but words just didn't feel right. i've read many fanfics written in this style, but none of them was so hauntingly beautiful as this one. * - * i loved the simple words and vague descriptions and the way you showed us everything other than explaining it. honestly, i was impressed and when i was at the middle of the story i forget about the grammar and just read without noticing small mistakes.
what i want to say is that this story is absolutely amazing, the characters were interesting and fascinating, especially daehyun. * - *
thank you so much for writing this, and i'm sorry for the really long comment. OTL
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