Chapter 3: just here to let the author know that i enjoyed this story very very very much. I just started shipping FanXing recently (i still choose to be in the ship even though the ship is now dead rip ;-;) and i'm really glad i found this. I feel bad for Yixing and Wu Fan ;__; I'm enjoying the theories/ideas of the other commentators regarding on the ending too muchlol <3 I just finished reading a FanXing fanfic called <48 hours> and boy does this and that fic made me feel great yes it does. I'm looking forward to your works, author <3 gonna start a FanXing Fanfics marathon before school starts hehe
Chapter 3: So I have 2 theories (sorry for this comment being so late) 1) Yixing maybe have this thing that he can't really kill himself like he just go in coma for a long period of time for his body to recover so Luhan waits and kills Yifan again or Yifan escape like he promise to Yixing 2) Yixing dies and Luhan decides to experiment with Yixing using the blood of others for Yixing's recovery
If both are wrong, I'm really sorry u.u but if one of them is almost correct that would perfect! So please, clear my doubts, Miss Author!
And an amazing story, great plot, perfect writing and the best of all, the suspense and open ending.
Thank you so much for writing this! ❃
Chapter 3: I know I'm late, but this is my theory. Yixing has been probably living longer than he really has, everytime he is about to die they "reboot" him by wioing away his memory. Hence why his old doctor was terminated, since it was too dangerous to keep him alive. Luhan follows Yixing everytime his memory is wiped to see if the experiment was a success (or maybe he just really in love him, butbhis line of work also puts him at risk of actually being able to gwt him back).
Or
This is his first time being rebooted, Luhan gets promoted for being the one to sell out Yixing. He wipes his memory in hopes of Yixing being able to forget abiut Kris or any of the past events. Yixing goes hone and as time passes he starts having blackoutsl, follow by rabdom flashes of foggy memories of a mistory blond man (Kris). Kris ended up escaping the city and found a society that was hudded and excluded from the goverment, where people live past 21. He then becomes the leader of this society, leading them to rebel against the goverment and in hopes to avenge his lover (yixing. Who he doesn't know hes alive).
Chapter 3: SEE YOU NEVER MAKE STUFF CHEESY WHEN THEY USUALLY ARE
ITS SO PERFECT AND NOTHING SOUNDS CLICHE OR CORNY
(Other than the fact that all dystopias have the thing where the so called peaceful death is actually very horrid but that's what a dystopia is isn't it) (kind of idk)
Chapter 2: OMIGOSH have I never mentioned it before
Or I haven't said enough but
Your writing itself is HEAVENLY
it's so freaking perfect and every single line makes me shiver in satisfaction
I need writing skills like these
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