3rd PREVIEW

NightMare
In shock, Eli stared at the face tilted above him. It was the spliting image of Kevin’s face.
- Whaaaaaaat ? What is it ? Did you saw a ghost ? Asked Kevin’s clone.
-Ke… vin ?
He looked into his eyes with a smiling face.
-… Aaaah ! I see. You know him ? He said pointing at himself.. 
But Eli wasn’t paying attention to what he was saying. He was to shocked and could only repeat kevin's name over and over again.
- That is why this body brought me here…Interresting. He said his head tilted sideways.
He was desesperate trying to find fflaw in this familiar face to confirm that it wasn’t his Kevin. But the more he was trying to found them, the more he couldn’t find anything. He had his hair, those chocolate eyes he loved, his nose, his lips and his pale colored skin. It was him.
It was Kevin and he was sure of it.
- Are you done ,Eli ? Whispered Kevin in his ear.
The latter flinched in fear. 
 
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moonlight77 #1
Chapter 6: yaaaaaah i wish it was longer than that , i can see you stil could make longer and add more drama to it , for exemple what would eli's reaction after hearing that kevin maybe is a vampire ? why you drop the story in the best part ? plz think about it , you could make more exciting .
ellyemilyn
#2
Chapter 6: Omg so kevin is still a monster at the end?
moonlight77 #3
Chapter 5: good i like it .
Suplemento #4
I like this idea, update soon, neh? ^^
misajinki93 #5
This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^