Black Paradise{Apply Closed}

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Black  Paradise

 

Year 3012. New empire. New everything; lifestyle, races, and struggles. Ten years before this year the creatures of the night rose above the human race with a certain motive in hand. At the time Grim reapers were usually the most 'powerful' creature of the night thus being the head reaper or death god that over ran the human race to almost nothing. It wasn't just so called 'creatures of the night' but mostly every creature that didn't want to live in hiding anymore, but give a turn to the humans of the world. The attack - more like massacre started in the middle of the night in Seoul. The so called war lasted only two years when millions of creatures and humans losing their lives. When creatures took over, they created villages called simply human villages since there wasn't many left. At first the creatures and humans got along and led different lives not caring that either of them were there until teenagers on both sides started to rebel. Human teens found out the dark sides of befriending different creatures of the nights especially the reapers which were demon like grim reapers but not exactly but that is a different story. Human teens soon learned that they weren't going to be 'sane' after being the their new friends. Human became addicted to the nightlife of creatures. 'Sarang Dok' or love poison became humans drug through the creatures. It was usually a mixture of either a creatures blood mixed with acid or another drug which would elevate the side effects and enjoyment time. Other humans that witnessed this - mostly adults- were disgusted and ashamed of their children for associating with their enemies. When creatures and humans started mating or as what you humans would say dating that is humans had their breaking point. An agency was made up of humans teens to break apart and basically arrest any other human associating themselves with creatures. The agency was called 'Haven' meaning that would restore the safe haven that humans once knew. This is where our story begins. A group of creatures and humans find themselves falling out of their own societies and into each other lives. Whether it be through Haven, running into each other, or simply through one of the many secret nightclubs that allow both humans and creatures into them.

Foreword

Basic  Information

Title: Black Paradise

Author: Twiillaa

Genre: Fantasy, Romance, and a bit of gore. Not much though.

Rated: M; mainly for language and some gore. Just to be safe.

Author's  Note

Oh, I don't know why I am making another story. I wanted something to write over my summer holidays, I guess. Also this story idea has been stuck in my brain for awhile now. Please don't steal my ideas or anything. If this sounds like another story then it's cocidence. Sorry about the lame layout and stuff. I trying out coding myself. I am still learning. I am really slow at it too. xD  A small FAQ and the rules will be next.

Twiillaa
I hope everyone had a good thanksgiving. I went on a trip but there will hopefully be an update tonight if not tomorrow.

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Kupuritama
#1
Chapter 29: Ai's stress baking is such a cute habit, omg. Also, I look forq ard to seeing how things with August ends up panning out conaidering as of this chapter only one of his eyes seems to have transformed. I suppose their little hideaway was bound to eventually be discivered but I still find myself somewhat saddened that Ai and August's more carefree days of pillow courts and gardening are inevitably coming to an end soon.

I really lile how you planned out the storyline so that a few humans ended up with Daijun and his group and vice versa with the creatures in Haven. It really givea a unique perspective of the different types of people that inhabit the world. Tbh when Yura was first brought to Haven I wasnt expecting her to make a friend.

FINALLY. Yura I made you and wven I was like facedesking at your obliviousness- of course Kangdae likes you! OTL;; Thank you Hoya for finally spelling it out for this dumb baku.

Man though Haven's leaders seem awfully... hardheaded with their beliefs. So much so to the point where it almost screams of ignorant intolerance. (Especially with Yunho here...)
Anyways, I'll keep on reading~ tbh I'm really anticipating the inevitable showdown. LOL
Kupuritama
#2
Chapter 28: Wow holy crap I was wondering why I hadn't seen you update this in a while but it turns out that the last time I was on mobile reading a chapter, I either accidentally clicked something or another since it turns out I was unsubbed from the stoey for some reason. D8

I'm out of town rn so I only have access to the mobile version on my phone, but at least I have some quality reading material now!

So much has happened in the story holy crap. I'll make a more comprehensive comment on the new chapters so please excuse my upcoming like... triple post. ; v ;

I forgot how much I loved the different character personalities. Seohyun and Sungyeol just waltzing into Haven headquarters all nonchalant and turning Sooyoung right there in front of everyone. Wow guys. Just wow.
morninginmarch #3
Chapter 27: Awww this is ending soon? Well I will sorely miss it when it does. But these chapters have been just so wonderful. So many couples like umph, finally everyone is together! Everyone's relationship is so special, the one with Ai and August is so cute and sweet, actually they all are sweet.

Natsumi and Dai are just like woah. They have a weird relationship going on there. But hey, at least Dai is being a bit more romantic. Aw, Nat and Sica are like gal pals now, especially since Sica is a cupid! And Dai, you really need to get a handle on the way you speak. And he is just so protective over her it's like crazy like dude, give her a bit of room to breathe! But I still find it absolutely adorable between the two of them. Ooo the tension with Haven and the reapers trying to find Ai because Gyuri, her royal fairy queen majesty was being a little . I love how Gyuri is the freaking fairy queen it suits her so much.

Waiting for more! Your updates are just pure gold.
ellisium
#4
Chapter 26: gah! they are all so adskhdsoifhslfhndsilfds! it's killing me! *screaming* SEIOUSLY THEY ARE ALL COUPLES NOW! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! ok i'll shut up!xD Jean Jean Jean Jean JEAAAAN, he's so cute.. being between two women but finally he did the right thing by picking Min :) and omg the scene with Ai and August... xD hahahah he was priceless! it made me laugh a lot lolz! xD but it's so sweet she doesn't want to drink specifically from him, since she obviously states that she cares about him way too much! :33
Kangdae and Yura are the most cool ones... they simply are all for themselves lol and Yura why so defensive, but i guess it's understandable.. being among people that actually want to hurt your kind. Natsumi and Dai are pretty much idk how to say it... they freak me out lol, not in a bad way tho. idk i cant express it well xD but as always your updates are awesome! waiting for moreee! <33
Kupuritama
#5
Chapter 25: Whoa holy crap so many things seem to be happening now.

Haven though- at this rate it almost seems as if they'll lose just because all of their members will eventually be turned into creatures. OTL;;
It was an interesting tidbit though to find out that Jessica and Dongwoo were supposed to die and remain deceased as humans- and that Leeteuk and Henry's interference has... further complicated things. LMAO. (as if things weren't complicated enough.)

Holy crap though, Dongwoo's little incident with the torching the chair and then Sulli literally booting him and Henry out into the cold. LOL.

UGH Yura's brothers are such s but wow I love how such minor characters I thought to include in my app seem to have rather kindly assisted in making Yura and Kangdae's relationship develop. (Even if it's because they kinda want to kill the two of them now.)
But jfc- Yura's behavior after being taken to Haven headquarters.
Can I just- "jerk-hole who should drown in a pool of his jerkiness". So articulate Yura. So articulate. LMAO- /facedesk/

It's kind of unfortunate though given how hard Kangdae had fought against and ultimately tried to avoid Haven- only to end up right back where he figuratively started.

Everyone's more or less kindo f sort of established now~! So I look forward to reading more of the storyline and corresponding couples as their relationships continue to develop. ' U '
morninginmarch #6
Chapter 24: Woah so Jessica is now a healing angel with pink wings! Woot woot, go angels! August and Ai are just as cute as ever <3

But the Natjun is progressing so awesomely! Dai has a nickname for Nat, he's calling her "Sumi" which is just so cute. And their whole argument about where they stand now. Gosh Dai, why are you so unromantic towards Sumi? But they're like official now, "like mates" that is so cute. And he's kind of possessive but that's actually adorably endearing for the two of them.

I am wondering about those two unknown creatures. Light and dark? That's very interesting. I will go check out your new apply fic then :) I've been looking for good ones <3 Until next time then darl!
ellisium
#7
Chapter 23: the new pic. is really beautiful!
damn you made the fight scene so good, and you know that's pretty difficult! now im going to worry over ai and august they will be after them... and i think that if it happens that haven will find ai then august will do sth about it and we'll be like OMG! ... okay what did i just say... i don't even get it!
jean and minhee are like really really my fave, it must be like the 3rd time i tell this? xD they just have this tension all the time! and poor natsumi her wing is hurt again, damn dai can't you treat a lady well for once?
although im surprised all of them fought in jean's dai's and baek's side but i can totally understand chanyeol since he was imprinted on and he wouldn't like baek to be hurt! GAH IT JUST GETS MORE AND MORE DRAMATIC!!!!!
morninginmarch #8
Chapter 23: Ooo fight fight fight! Your action scenes are already wonderful, what are you talking about? If they were even better they would become mind-blowing!

Daijun cares about Natsumi! And she works for him now? Like woah, she's actually on his side for once, did you forget that he like killed you temporarily? Nevermind about that, they're just too cute. Jean and Minhee are adorbs too like seriously and the Baekyeol is just killing me!

I can't wait until all eight of them meet on different sides of the battlefield. By the way, I love the new poster. Seriously, they're always so gorg. Love ya babe <3 Keep the awesome updates coming!
Kupuritama
#9
Chapter 22: Well, can't say I didn't see the inevitable imprinting/mating of Baekhyun and Chanyeol but- LMAOasdfghjjkl- OTL;;
Baekhyun's reaction was gold."Oh no. To a guy, Heechul-hyung what the hell?!"

The fluff between Ai and August is adorable. Props to August suffering a bit to make sure Ai gets the sustenance that she needs to survive.

Bringing up how everyone's fate seems like an interesting thing- that plus foreshadowing on how the 8 main plotlines are all going to eventually converge. (Boy am I looking forward to that!)

But yes, I'm glad you seem to be a bit better now! ; u ;
ellisium
#10
Chapter 22: health is the most important so rest first Twilla, no need to rush it. get well soon and take care of yourself :3 !!