Torn Heart

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torn heart
 
The best kind of love is with your best friend? Im Yoona used to agree with that. She was content with just being able to talk to Choi Minho every day, and listen to him talk every day. She was content with being his best friend, and it didn't matter to her that Minho only takes her as a best friend. She loved how she would always be the first person that Minho would think of when he needs someone to confide in, when he needs someone to share the joy with him, and even when he needs a shoulder to cry on. Yoona was satisfied to be all that.
 
But when Minho decides to get himself a girlfriend, everything starts to go wrong for Yoona.
 
Firstly, out of all people, Minho decides to get together with Yoona's girl best friend, Kwon Yuri. Secondly, Yoona knows she can never give up on Minho, even though she's always reminding herself to do so. Thirdly, Minho didn't know about Yoona's torn heart, and he never will. Fourthly.. well things just start to go really bad from that point on.
 

Foreword

characters / teaser
 
Choi Minho ❚ The oblivious boy
Im Yoona ❚ The hopeless romantic in love
Kwon Yuri ❚ The girl who would do anything for love
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"Yoong, stop avoiding me." Minho shouted, making Yoona stop in her tracks. "Why have you been avoiding me so much lately?"

"Do you even care?" Yoona said as she spun on her heel to face Minho, her words deadly, like arrows piercing through Minho's heart. She was not only his best friend, but also the girl who he loved so much. How could he not care about her? She owned his heart, and it was just impossible to forget the beautiful and the gentle face of this goddess.

Minho shook his head slowly, mouthing a 'no', feeling far too hurt to speak as he gazed at Yoona's leaving back with a gaze bearing so much pain, it was impossible for anyone to believe that Yoona could only be a best friend to him.

She wasn't. But she doesn't know that. And she never will.
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"Only Seohyun's method can get me some escape now." Yoona thought as she sighed, rolling the piece of paper and gently putting it into the bottle. She smiled faintly as she pushed the bottle into the sea, hoping that it would reach someone who could understand.

Someone.. who would understand how much it hurts.
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"Minho.. Would you go on the roller coaster with me?" Yoona said softly, her voice almost a whisper. Minho chuckled. "Why not? I'll go buy the tickets."

A single tear fell from Yoona's left eye as she watched Minho walk towards the counter. "After today, Minho, I'll leave you forever. I wish I could listen to your deep chuckle everyday for the rest of my life, but I can't. I can't and I never will be able to. I want to sit on the roller coaster with you everyday for the rest of my life, but I can't." Yoona looked up at the roller coaster as she wiped her tears away. "Choi Minho, remember something.. Saranghae."
author's note
 
Hey people! :D Another story I made up somewhere at the back of my head, and I don't really know if this is going to be a long one or a short one .___.
 
Also, I'm really sorry if you guys feel like I'm writing Yuri as a bad person or anything, because I definitely do not have anything against Yuri nor MinYul(:
Anyhoo, do subscribe and comment(: it would mean so much ^^

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queenofnothing
#1
The foreword hooked me. Nice job Author <3
-qrownie
#2
very cute!
sleepingdreamer96 #3
Chapter 3: Pleasee update soon!!^^
Yuri you're so bad!!
I curious what Yuri want to do.
Please don't ruin minyoon moments.
ll0vex3_her
#4
Oh yes!!!<3333
gianni
#5
waaaaaaaaaaaah! ♥ very nice!<br />
hehehe waiting for your update<br />
and more shineegeneration interactions, okay? ^^<br />
ribbonforever
#6
This so awesome!!!<br />
Everyone is matched up!!!<br />
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Yoona and Yuri (COOL DOWN)<br />
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Wow those pics that you made are awesome!!!!Cooolll!!!! Is it okay if I ask you to make one for me?
Forever-Beast #7
This is so cute! ^^ Can't wait for your next update!
Emerald #8
this chapter was sooooooooooooooo sweet<br />
update soon
evanescent- #9
@JDog610<br />
Unnie(:<br />
I'm glad that I got all your favourite couples^^<br />
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@Thesillylily<br />
I hope so too^^<br />
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@candyredhearts<br />
thanks for the sweet comment, unnie(:<br />
i'm glad i got two of your fave couples! ^^<br />
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@LonelyDay<br />
Hello unnie<3<br />
Yes, yes, there are many pairings x_x<br />
does it get you confused too much? D:<br />
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Mian for that!<br />
And yes, I do love minyoon's interaction over here too<3<br />
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and thanks for the comment on the gifs^^<br />
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@majiang<br />
Yes, I hope for that too^^<br />
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@b2utyfulshawol<br />
Angela^^<br />
Nope, don't think that it's unnecessarily long! I love long comments<3<br />
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Ah, yes, yes MinYoon is really cute in here^^<br />
I'm glad I convinced you of that xD<br />
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Don't worry, don't worry xD every girl in here will get a partner. :D<br />
I hope you're not disliking Yul too much and that my story doesn't make everyone dislike Yuri ;~;<br />
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@minyoon<br />
I know right^^<br />
That's pretty mean of her xD<br />
(no offence~ I have nothing against Yul.)<br />
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@WhiteSnow0425<br />
I'm sorry for not updating for such a long time xD<br />
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@ribbonforever<br />
I'm glad someone is getting in! xD<br />
Ah, yes.. I wish Yul would become friendlier later on(:<br />
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Yes, yes, I make the gifs myself^^<br />
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@JDog610<br />
Heyyo again unnie(:<br />
Yes, TaeTeuk was really cute xD<br />
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I feel bad to my readers too D:<br />
Thanks for the 'hwaiting', Taeyeon unnie<3<br />
Unnie is really too sweet(:
jenuinelyjen
#10
AWWWW TaeTeuk was too cute! Taeng was so shy!! ^^ And the maknae couple... They're too adorable. It's ok for the long wait! I update slowly too -.- Aigoo... I feel bad to my own readers! Cute chapter, dongsaeng hwaiting! School comes first, so don't worry about us, we'll always support you, no matter how long you take!