— shattered stardust; one shots

Description

                              We live, we breathe, we're just original beings. Introducing the unusual ones: Yongguk, Junhong, Daehyun, Youngjae, Himchan and Jongup. They led a somewhat unique—for the lack of a better word—life. Fate brought them together. They work as a team, and are always able to sort out quarrels and fights without anyone getting injured. They were together all the time and most people would think that they're inseparable.

                                 When sparks start to fly, everything seemed to spiral out of control. The tension rose to a crescendo, and the atmosphere was always tensed in the room. Their relationship with one another started getting strained and they quarreled more often; of which no one even bothered to smoothen out. They start to wander their own way, separating. However, fate has a different idea in mind. It brings them back together, and this time, they're determined to make it work out.

Foreword

                             "What do you call it? We call it fate."

Hello. This is me getting back into writing again. It's been a long time since I wrote, and I miss the feeling of writing. This is not a chaptered fanfic. This is—as the title suggests—one shots. All the one shots are joined together, just that I don't want this to be a chaptered fanfic. If you are reading this, please make sure to read every chapter, or you will be confused. This idea just kind of popped into my mind, and I tried to make it as original as possible. And, I'm not sure if the description is satisfying, because I spent at least a half hour on it, trying to make it good. The group I'm writing in here was the first group which came into my mind after I thought of this idea so I decided to write about them. I hope readers have fun reading this!

-Yuna

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xXRockxHeartXx
#1
Chapter 1: Well, you definitely have a wide variety of words and descriptive lamguage. It's a well written chapter for a somewhat prologue. I understand how the theme of this chapter relates to the 'slice of life' theme of the overall collection. Insane regret is definitely a huge part of life. You did a good job explaining the mental process of it. Just go back and edit because I thought I saw a few grammar/spelling errors, but other than that it's a really good piece.
-jeiraz #2
Chapter 1: you gonna leave us hanging or?
there's nothing to criticize; it seems decent- more than decent to be quite fair. for a twelve year old, this is a good chapter or drabble.
RainbowCupcake
#3
Chapter 1: HOLY SHET I LOVE YOUR WRITING DUDE
its like so easy to read and everything fits together perfectly and asdfghjkl
its all flowing together and i love it eeeek
/subscribes even though i'm not a fan of b.a.p just 'cause of your writing
exothermc
#4
Chapter 1: fRICK IT'S BEUATIFUL IMG OING TO CRY IN A PUDDLE OF TEARS AND FEELS...
aiskuriimu
#5
OH and the gif is very pretty, too!
aiskuriimu
#6
this seems veri interesting to me! :) it's clear even from the description alone that you have a way with words and writing in general! *subscribed*