Daebak Review Shop {Not Accepting}

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Have you been working hard on your story?

Need an outside opinion?  Constructive Criticism?  Some encouragement for you to finish?

Do you write angst, drama, comedy, romance, mature, lemon, lime or any other citrusy genre? 

Perhaps simply searching for a new fanfic to read and want to see a detailed opinion?

Then welcome to the  “Daebak Review Shop”! 

Here we will review your stories and offer the best of our services.

Just fill out the submission form and leave it in the comment section below! (◕‿◕❀)

Foreword

 

`the  rules;

1) Subscribe to the shop (upvoting would be nice~ ^.^) 

2) You must completely fill out the entire submission form, or reviews will be delayed.

3) You may request from other shops as long as they allow it.

4) Comment after you receive your review.

5) It would be appreciated if credit were given to this shop for the review, with the link as well.

6) Be patient. The reviewers have a life outside of aff, thus they may not immediately get back to you.

7) Don't disrespect or bash. We're here to help you. Your review will be null and void if this situation emerges. 

 

 

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GayForHan
#1
Chapter 11: I'm so glad we didn't get an F on our story.....lol thanks xD
Cecei I told you you're a better writer than me xDDD
-Shirpo~
Whynot
#2
Chapter 2: Username: Whynot

FanFic Title: Coexisting with the Devil

Genre: Angst & Drama

Chapters: 1

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/415038/coexisting-with-the-devil-angst-drama-fantasy-seohyun-tvxq-yunho-angels

Summary: A demon and an angel can never coexist.
That's what the Bible, and society have taught us, but is it really true? Demons are a posion, something toxic that must stay away from, but what is amazing of the body is the capacity of adapting.

Can angel adapt? To the burning and tempting feeling of evil?

Moral Of The Story: At the bottom of all beauty lies something inhuman.

Reviewer: Jae_Ree

Ideal time: 1 week, it's a oneshot so I think it'll be pretty fast hahaha but I'm not rushing or anything

Anything else: English is not my first language
GayForHan
#3
Chapter 11: Thanks for the review mate!
GayForHan
#4
Chapter 3: Username: GayForHan

FanFic Title: Feu Vert (French for Green Light)

Genre: Mystery/Sci-Fi/Romance

Chapters: 2 (ongoing)

Story Link: http://t.co/Fz3rFjIG7x

Summary: Laura, a girl from another universe travels to planet earth trying to seek peace within her heart and to see what kind of games fate has instored for her. Along the way she collides with Key of SHINee. Will meeting Key help or destroy her way of finding peace in her heart?

Moral Of The Story: Humans can give warmth by just their showing their sincerity.

Reviewer: Pirupi

Ideal Time To Review: 1-2 days

Anything Else: Two idiots who aspires to be inspiration to other people & we're amateur writers. We're new to AFF *bows* Please take care of us.
TaeminIsBigHeart
#5
Chapter 6: Username: TaeminIsBigHeart
Fanfic title: Former & the Latter
Genre: Comedy and Romance
Chapters: 2(for now it's still not completed)
Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/444128/former-the-latter-cap-chunji-comedy-niel-ricky-romance-teentop
Summary: Namjoo is a dongsaeng hatter while Chunji is a noona killer. Chunji will do anything just to make Namjoo fall for him. But there is something more that will be revealed on the fanfic..
Moral of the story: No matter how much you avoid fate, fate will always does what should be done.
Reviewer: Jae_Ree
Ideal time to review: Maybe after 4 or 5 days? I'm not really rushing so please take your time :)
Anything else: I just want to thanks in advance! :)
GreenGardenPop
#6
Chapter 4: Username: GreenGardenPop
Fanfic title: The Girl and the Sea
Genre: Romance
Chapters: 1
Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/427910/
Summary: She went to the sea every late afternoon to sing her soul out, and she thought that the beautiful strains of a guitar that always accompanied her singing were just her imagination.
Moral of the story: Hmm... Maybe never give up... I'm not sure xD
Reviewer: Kay-Rin
Ideal time to review: 2-3 days
Anything else: English isn't my first language.

Thanks...
SiMpLyJustine
#7
Chapter 9: Yahoo! Thank you, and 91%? I thought i'd get like...-9999999% ..And Thank you for correcting the mistakes, I was actually suspiscious about those little mistakes. I kept reading over and over and had a feeling it was wrong but I didn't change it since I just didn't know what it was. And I really didn't know we had to start a new paragraph. o.o *bangs head on wall* I'm a newbie. And thanks for the advice, I will change it. I was actually having a hard time coming with a title, so I put what I saw come out on the story the most. Getting this the next day was faster than I thought, thank you so much <3 i LOVE you three so much. I'll make sure to mention to everyone and anyone I know.
Kay-Rin
#8
Here is the rubric to make things easier on you guys:


Username:

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Whynot
#9
Chapter 7: thanks alot ^^ I'll surely try to improve :)
FTisland_BigBang
#10
MORAL LESSON Take all the chances, or you'll regret it. There are always some for us to love, we just need to be patient