Work It Out

Description

Niel and L'joe are still very awkward around each other it’s up to the members to help them get everything out in the open.

Foreword

Hi this a sequel to my other story called So Obvious Check it out here!

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/417304/so-obvious-angst-fluff-changrick-nieljoe-capji

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Amalya #1
Chapter 1: Oh! You did such a beautiful job of making sure that things didn't click at the beginning, just because Daniel confessed and then at the end... Ah well. I do enjoy happy endings and I hardly think everything has been resolved but definitely props to you for paying attention to the lasting effects of heartache and how recognition doesn't just magically make things better.

I did enjoy the way that the other members conspired to get them together again. That was endearingly cute. It's always nice to see Cap being the wise leader and good old Chunji, psetering L. Joe as much as necessary. hehe I would have liked to have seen more between Changjo and Ricky, at least in terms of them appearing in the story, but it was a good read overall. I'm usually on the fence about pairing all the members off with each other but it is what it is, and at least you weren't forcing it down our throats. ;) That was nice.

It was a good read overall and you definitely considered many of the real life elements that come along with relationships. They can be wonderful, terrible things and this portrays it beautifully. hehe Good job!
omgith #2
Chapter 1: Aww, this was cute. My Nieljoe feels~~ ! :D ♥
Stripysnitch #3
Chapter 1: aw cute- im happy it ended good ^_^ lol I came here from the 'so obvious' fic ofcourse cause I couldn't just leave the sequel knowing it existed XD it was a teeny bit corny for me haha but I usually read hard angst so its prolly just me! lol, but thanx for the coolz fics :)
ayumi13 #4
Chapter 2: yesss of course !! but!! l.joe tops.. he has to top!! he can never.. ever.. ever!! bottom.. just creepy.. -|||-
pochamanii #5
Chapter 2: please make L.joe tops!!! If it's Niel.. I think just don't suit him too well... :)
anazmawar #6
Chapter 1: So sad, and nice story.
They 4 boys make plans is very romantic dinner. Hehehe
this one shot or have continue chapter?
anazmawar #7
please update soon author...
:)
i can't wait your story
Sherii #8
Can't wait!
meyrall #9
hey i read d previous prequel n its awesome
n thanks for d sequel
unknown_anonymous #10
pwease make lots of capji moments!! i love that couple so freakin much!! update soon!!:3
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