Chapter 4: First time making love Jongyu was sooo romantic and perfect! And omg, could your Onho be any more sweet and precious. My face hurts from smiling at all the cute. I love Onho and Jongyu! More please.

Chapter 4: yayyyy Onho movie date XD.have you seen their couple yellow shoes thar they wore at "Breaking News" dance practice....
They're just too obvious ~~~

Awesome Jongyu in ch 1. Ch 2 was very sweet. Can't wait to read more Jongyu and Onho, my favourite OTPs!

Chapter 2: Oh my gosh, you are killing me with this piece. Poor Onew - just thinking about him hurting like that makes me wanna hulk up and destroy people. No one should be mean to him! And Jonghyun, being all 007-like... well, kinda. Ahahahah! Super sweet. Thank you for sharing!

Chapter 1: "and I'm not very good at writing fluff so I hope it was alright."

but.. it is alright. and.. oh gosh, you're so good at writing fluff. i mean, just see what you have created: amazing, really.

Chapter 1: oh gosh
HOT, this was HOT *¬* first time Jongyu ... ____! ♥ loved it
Minho thank you for made the time more amazing xDDDDDD
&& the toki aww

yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey more jongyu more jongyu hihi

Chapter 1: this fics is one of the best jongyu fics I've ever read. it's very difficult to me to explain why but i'll try: in this story i found a jinki fragile yes, but also strong enough to love with all his heart and forget his fears gifting himself to jonghyun. there's a jonghyun so calm, so adorable and respectful and passionate. i like the plot built around the "first time" and the successful attempt to make it all very sweet and genial, but realistic. i've really seen a soft representation of my ideal jongyu couple, so i loved it so much. the way you've described the part is amazing: yeah it's ty, but so romantic i can die. the jinki's character is incredible, seriously. i really laughed when i read "jonghyun junior", oh my gawd! you're such a genius for this kind of fics: , fluff, cute, humor, first time, au, slash - a perfect mix. i enjoyed it so much, thank you. thank you for accepting to write this to me, it's become one of my favourite stories. thanks.

"Jinki was already in bed, complete with baggy blue sweatpants and a hoody with a bunny on it. He also had his little pink bunny next to him, called Tokki. Yes, he was a very creative child so that was what happened when he was old enough to finally name the bunny." is one of my favourite parts because when i read it, i felt jinki's softness and cuteness. i was so "fhykahwromgwqh", lol. ♥