When you all breathe in and out, I fall.

Description

What if Hyukjae sees his lover in an act of passion with someone else, them kissing, him staring. They don’t see him right away, actually the boyfriend doesn’t see him at all, and when his friend, Daniel, finally sees him: it’s already too late.
And then Hyukjae just wants to learn how to breathe on his own, so he escapes.

Foreword

Okay, I'm tired now.
Like really.
No I'm serious. Don't believe me?
Well, me neither, ain't that funny.

Here I am again, writing a story I couldn't ignore. An idea that popped in my heads a long time ago and now I was referring to my started stories and this one stood out. It's a one shot, so I'm lucky with that, even if I should be writing more for my multi chapter stories. This just didn't want to go. I wrote a happy (not fluffy) Kyuhyuk, so this is me telling life: Yah you, I like angst, so stop putting stories without angst in my head~

I hope I succeed in making at least someone cry, okay? It's supposed to be angsty, I hope I succeed even though I hadn't thought of making someone cry until the last few phrases...
As you will see in the FF, I at writing poetry, even if it doesn't rime. I don't write poetry. I'm bad at it, but this was actually supposed to be a RAP... You'll get it when you get there. I hope. èé If not, I'm a bad author and I should stop writing right then. Yeah right, like that would happen~~

Anyways, thank you again for reading whatever I write, it's comforting~ Warms my heart.
I feel like I'll soon have boils around my heart because it's so warm~
/slap YAH, who did that. èé Meanie.
I feel like a prolific author... YEA RIGHT~
I really feel like a compulsive brat, if you ask me~

Anyways, here my usual:

 

Title: When you breath in and out, I fall.
Author: Me // Lemon-Deulop
Length: One-Shot -- 2 750 words~~
Rating: PG-13 for swearing and all that.
Disclamer: Still don't own them and pretty happy I don't own an actual human being... It would be like having babies... EW~~~
Warnings: Boy love, Angst, my usual bad grammar/typos/etc... [[:

 

 

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leejinki123
#1
Chapter 1: ahh, ive been reading angst all day and this just breaks my heart. ahh the end is sad but real. its hard for hyuk because he loves him yet he was betrayed. aish
thank you authornim, great fic!
xxo_oxx
#2
Chapter 1: this is really heart breaking..
*great job author-nim*
Hyuk_Cass1
#3
Chapter 1: how could you kyuhyun!!!!!!!!! aww poor hyukkie.. he is suffering so much
hyukee44
#4
Chapter 1: hurrr poor my baby hyuk, hurr kyuhyun i hate u gawd
Akuropanda #5
Chapter 1: Don't Ever Forgive Him,Hyukkie!!!!
jewElf_13
#6
Chapter 1: wait....finished already or what??
no...kyu has to make up for hyukjae...
2H-FisHyuk
#7
Chapter 1: Stupid Kyu for making MY Hyuk in pain and broke into pieces!! Hyuk, come to me or Hae or Siwon that can protect you. You deserved it Kyu!
Indyie7 #8
Chapter 1: Kyu deserved it u.u poor hyuk~
EunHaeShipper #9
Chapter 1: Hyuk, go to donghae or siwon or min, i don't really care.
Damn kyuhyun for breaking your heart ㅠ.ㅠ
gummybacon
#10
Chapter 1: stupid kyuhyun! you deserve it. you hurt hyukjae. huhu