Femme Fatale

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A colorful blue drink with an umbrella was placed in front of me. I lifted my eyes to look at Hyoyeon who wore a teasing grin.

"What's this?"

"A gift from a certain lady at nine o'clock," she purred (yup, she purred) playfully and went off before I got to say anything. As she said, I looked to my left and got to see the same girl from earlier, this time only three seats away. She saw me looking, smiled and waved friendly.

I returned it, took my drink and moved closer to her spot. Ending up next to her, I quickly said, "Thanks for the drink."

"You're welcome," she replied, her voice like satin. I eyed my rather colorful liquid treat before tasting it. "I've been watching you all evening." That made me almost choke on my drink. "I'm serious," she said.

"I've been watching you too." I wanted to take it back as soon as it left.

Stupid brain...

Foreword

Hello, good people of AsianFanfics! This is my first fanfiction, so I'd really appreciate some feedback so that I can find ways to approve. Big sone here, haha! ~ ☆ Hope you will leave a comment and subscribe! =D

Credits: Story by me and art by ☼ Summer Lovin' ☼ | Graphic Shop | 

Thank you, Divergin1004 of Cloudy Day, Clear Day Reviews, for your review!

I thank you, Hannie of Dark Desire Shop, for your review!

Review by Hershe Review Up, thank you.

Thanks to ∞ Infinity Review Shop ∞ for their review!

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charito #1
Chapter 1: love the story:)
luisahuah #2
Chapter 1: I can't believe this is just a oneshot! Your writing is amazing! I really do hope you decide to do more SooSun! They're my all time favorite pairing and it makes me sad that there aren't that many fanfics that are mainly about them. This was so good! I loved it
Youngielove #3
Chapter 1: Nice job author! :D
You've made me love SooSun more
I hope you do more SooSun in the future
concart #4
Tbh, I've been bored of Soosun for...maybe since new year and my otp changed to 2ny lately. I read sooo many 2ny stories instead Soosun and save sooo many 2ny pics instead Soosun too. Dunno why I feel like liking them again after read this fic of yours :))
First ff? Since this is good, then would you write another story? You seems have talent, author-nim! Kkk.
hideandseeker #5
Chapter 1: That was honestly one of the best oneshots I've read in a while, which is saying something. I read a lot of oneshot, you know. I may be addicted to them...
SooSun is such a great couple, and I loved your descriptions of Sooyoung while she was dancing, it's exactly how I'd imagine her, powerful, y, gorgeous. And how you described the club too, it's a place that you don't want to be, yet somehow are at, for whatever reasons. You style of writing is so great to read, you can visualize everything, and when you do, it's a vivid image. Great job.

Can I request a oneshot? I'm not sure if you do boyxgirl, I know that a lot of authors will just stick to one, but I'd love a HoSun FF. (Infinite's Hoya and SNSD's Sunny) It's a total crackship, but I tend to really like a lot of crackships, especially when the guy is someone I really like or respect. Hoya's someone I like a lot, and not just because he's good-looking or because he's a good dancer. I admire him for chasing his dream, which is what Sunny did as well. So, yeah. Do you think you could?
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