The Weeping White Lie

Description

Donghae has a lover... The correct term would be brother, but after his white lie, they have become publicly known to the school as lovers. Hyukjae, the 15 years old new kid and Donghae the 17 years old playboy, from brothers to lovers become the center of attention of the school until someone is added... Donghae's enemy and maybe even nemesis, Kyuhyun. Of course like any romance story, Kyuhyun wants everything Donghae has and that means, it especially means Donghae's lovers... Which by consequences means Donghae's little brother, Hyukjae who is also Donghae's lover... Kind of, not really, but with that little white lie, they are seen as lovers.

In this game of thug of war, where Hyukjae becomes the rope, who will win, the brother or the enemy? And when you add a friend who also falls in love with the rope, someone who will have Donghae's approval, where if Kyuhyun really falls in love he will also need the approval of the older brother...

Will it be too late to have the love of your life when all you wanted was the love of your enemy's life? 

Foreword

Hey guys, it's me again...

I'm still currently writing this. It will be seperated into chapters, which will be a new one for me. I'm currently 4, 000 words into this story. I wrote this all today. Had this superbe idea floating into my mind until I couldn't just NOT write the damn thing. So here we are... I won't post the first chapter just yet, must do things first... Like read it again and again before posting it after correcting my mistakes. Some mistakes will still be there, but bear with me, yeah? [:

I'm currently really nervous. I hope you will all love this story, story which will consume me if I don't finish it. I love the idea behind it... Sassy little Hyukjae, you will notice very quickly... Playboy older Donghae and brother to Hyukjae. 

Ah, also... I'm hesitating between finishing the story with a Kyuhyuk or ____hyuk.... It's still a secret as to who will be the other corner of the triangle. [: mouhahaha I kind of think I know who will be the end lover, if it's one of those two, but please tell me which person you would prefer Hyuk to finish with. [: A~ I'm so excited! Please read the following chapters and tell me what you think of them, could you? [:

If someone could do a poster for me? [: Would be awesomely awesome. I can even write a story with Hyukjae as a nice person with whomever you want... --I can't write bad!Hyukjae, just because OK.-- Or you can do it for free. As you wish. [: If you have some other resquest, message me alright? [:  

 

Title: The Weeping White Lie. [For now, I'm still thinking about a better title.]
Author: Lemon-Deulop, in other words ME, my lovelies.
Length: Unknown, chaptered...
Rate: PG-13 for now, may go up. Swearing, because Donghae has a fool mouth in this story. Says a lot of swear words.
Disclamer: Only real in my mind, I don't know what I'm doing. They are their own person. I love them, they don't even know I'm alive... or something like that. God this feels sad... haha They're awesome, I'm... I'm me, dammit.
Warnings: Boy love --shouldn't be a warning, but you know... Swearing, like for real, in real writing. Bad grammar/spelling. I try to proof read, but I at proof reading, instead of doing what authors do and suposedly get out words, I put more into it.... èé Aish~....  I'll add more things here as I go along. [:

 

 

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leejinki123
#1
this storyline is new and exciting. looking forward to whats cominh next. i love hyuk's personality and the harry potter reference was great.probably because i love harry potter alot.
thank you ~
257471 #2
Chapter 2: waiting for this one...update soon please
Hyuk_Cass1
#3
Chapter 2: sooo cute hyukkie is... please update authornim... eagerly waiting for it
Imakpop_lover
57 streak #4
Chapter 2: Omg, when are you going to update this? I really hope you didn't give up on this because this is ing amazing.I really really love the plot and hopefully you'll update soon:)))
endlessBlue
#5
Chapter 2: i really hope u'd continue updating this. i really like this ^^
if it's not too much, please continue writing this^^
de_m00n
#6
Chapter 2: i like Eunhae brothership here...and i like when you make Hyuk not a weak little brother... :)
Indyie7 #7
Chapter 2: This is so interesting~!!! I thinks it would be cool if Siwon fell in love with Hyuk õ/ or even Sungmin *---* Please update soon~
Hyukinfinite
#8
Chapter 2: hyukjae is so cute *_*, and donghae is a possessive brat

btw donghae and hyukjae are real brothers right?
analee592 #9
Chapter 2: this story is funny.. it would be epic though when hyukjae finally ends up with kyuhyun...i bet haehae would be so furious by that! hahahaha...wait..this is kyuhyuk, right??