Chance

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This story maybe a little short. I was only planning to do 5 chapters but if I feel ike it would be longer there will be more please. Bear with me, I only give advice on how to write stories and how good stories are and I can't structure my own, but I'll try.

Foreword

We weren’t suppose to be together but no matter how hard we tried, fate always brought us back. So we finally got together. At first no one seemed to mind it but that changed when things got serious.

*Doni's POV*

*On the phone*

"Oppa, how far are you?" I questioned. It was taking him longer than usual to come to my place.

"Oh I’m almost there. Maybe 5 minutes away, at least," he reassured me yet his voice was not as happy as it usually was. 

That was strange. It's our one year anniversary. I shook it off. Maybe he had a rough morning.

"Okay oppa. See you soon." And with that we hung up the phone.

*Yoochun's POV* 

I was on my way to see my wife. Well we weren't married but it sure felt that way, and I loved every moment I spend with her. That is, until I got that phone call

"You know what your suppose to do right?" 

"She's my girlfriend, please don't do this " I said, no I begged. 

"DO IT NOW!!! OR ELSE......" then the phone line went dead.

What was I supposed to do now?


 

Aight guys I hate doing forwards because I never know what to write with out giving away too much of the story ... Chapter 1 by the end of the day? Hmm we'll see......
 

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Samantha24 #1
Chapter 4: Oh no... I hope it will last.. I dont want something bad to happen to Doni
minnie6002
#2
Chapter 4: hahaha how dare they forgot chunnie's birthday?XD
update soon^^
rudehero
#3
Chapter 3: Don't second guess yourself, this chapter was not brutal! I do like the fact that you gives images. But Donelle is Chun's girlfriend? I wonder how they met?
minnie6002
#4
Chapter 3: wawawa what what happened?
aaaahhhh chunnie is soooo soo cuteee>.<
update soon^^
rudehero
#5
Chapter 2: Good story, so far I did notice a few grammar errors but great start though!
Samantha24 #6
Chapter 2: hmmm.. im intrigued... pls update soon.. thanks
minnie6002
#7
Chapter 2: sweeeeeet>.<
jiji is one of a million who dare ignoring joongie hahahahaXD
enurayaya
#8
its seem like interesting!looking forward
minnie6002
#9
Chapter 1: niceeeeee I like slow pace keke^^update soon^^
minnie6002
#10
whoooa seems nice^^you can't do that to me update soon please>.<