Love lost

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And so I write.

Ugly words and hurt feelings, ink on paper. My heart at my throat, I’ll throw up. I’ll puke and it’ll be messy. My chest stomped on, because I think he doesn’t love me anymore.

I’m too much of a coward to ask if he does.

Foreword

Angsty Drabbl-ish. I don't even know, i was listening to sad songs and this is what came out of it. It's Ji's POV, btw.

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Ayaaahime #1
Chapter 1: Full of emotions, beautifully written :D Like it :D
TOPcorn
#2
Chapter 1: Heartbreaking. My chest physically hurts while reading it.
Still, it's beautiful.
It's an expressive piece. Short and sweet.
showmeyour-heart
#3
Chapter 1: Ahhh Jiyong.

Seungri's love has expired, Jibaby. Like canned tuna. It rots and it stinks and just unbearable. It's ugly and monotonous and raw and just throw it away. But like the starving cat you are, you don't mind the stink and you pretend that it's fresh and not from a can. And so, you eat it.

It's a weird simile (especially for angst) but my brain is kind of lacking of muse and sparkly words so whatever
Marshii99
#4
Chapter 1: it's...heartbreaking TT TT
shsszn #5
Chapter 1: whoa. the words...
somehow i like this ^^