It Hurts

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" you, Kim Jongin."

It was a Saturday night. Luhan would've been on a date with Sehun, but he was busy.

Strange, Luhan thought. Afterall, it was Valentine's day.

But if Sehun was busy, he was busy, and Luhan would never question that.

Quite surprised by a sudden evening visit by the of the school, Luhan could only snarl.

The figure nonchalantly raised his hand, shaking a finger at the boy whom he had developed a little craving for. 

"No, no, no, my Luhannie. Mark my words. I'm always right." 

And with that, he strolled away, a knowing smirk on his lips as Luhan rolled his eyes at Jongin's back, though deep down inside, there was a seed of doubt.

 

"Luhan, he doesn't love you."

 

Prompt

Word count: 12,749

Foreword

Written for--

myths and mysterious || a writing contest

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thatweirdyeoja #1
Chapter 1: IM SO DEVASTATED OH MY GOD THIS WAS SUCH A GOOD READ MY POOR BABY LUHAN ㅠㅠ
faithlu #2
Chapter 1: omg i was hoping for hunhan to get together but sehun was suchh a jerk
plainme #3
Chapter 1: i just skimmed through this and didn't read word by word. yet i can feel the angst. it's no joke at all. I'm gonna watch ing unicorns to get my mood up then reread this and maybe i'll comment again. this is a terribly amazing story in case i didn't get the message through.
yhennn #4
Chapter 1: owh wow, I can't feel anything. at the end, they all got hurt.
innocent-bystander #5
Chapter 1: As always, you know what I'm gunna say...I'm a big fan, you can call me ur first extreme die-hard fan
machiavellian #6
Chapter 1: This is just so perfect ;;
aominechu #7
Chapter 1: Ugh my heart hurts so much. I'm even tearing up a bit...really amazing ending, I really hoped that Jongin and Luhan could find their happiness together...
shikasic #8
Chapter 1: awesome......
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