Betrayed

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Never feels like it's wrong.

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gwiboonivy #1
Chapter 1: :(((((((((((((((((((((((((( this is heartbreaking

the fact that taemin is cheating,,,, minho being abusive,,,, the endING,,, e v e r y t h i n g just hits right in the feels:-(
maxjibong #2
Chapter 1: Yeah, angst and violent stories are always good~
KirinoKoyama #3
Chapter 1: T^T Taemin... Why you gotta cheat on Minho?!

Hope you feel better.
WreckSea-MVP #4
Chapter 1: Oh dear Neptune....
Things just escalated so quickly....
babyshinee #5
Chapter 1: I cannot blame Minho at all for the jealousy and range that he felt because what Taemin did was not right at all. But to kill someone is not the correct thing to do. But Minho is blinded with madness and fury so yeah...
Zebra96 #6
Chapter 1: ago efhsl;kfjlskjfldksj
oh my
what just happened
placebo_ #7
Chapter 1: Is the other man onew ? ;,;
RinKim #8
Chapter 1: I always loved your writing but... Now I don't know... TT TT
It's always so sad and... Violent... I don't like that at all ._.
I miss your fluffy stuff, your sweet stories (with a little of maybe) ... This is just making my bad days worse by reading, so I wont really read any of these one-shots anymore, sorreh.. It's just too sad, and my life is miserable enough.
Cereal #9
Chapter 1: Oh my god, please don't think I'm insulting your writing. You know I think you're a fabulous author. I just tend to insult stuff. You know I love you ;~; <3
Cereal #10
Chapter 1: You call this an attempt? Pshhh~

I feel like it WANTS to make me cry, but it just doesn't do the trick. Nice try, though <3 I will be working on something pour vous very soon ;)
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