Reflections

Description

In New Seoul, the Queen rules the lower folk with an iron fist. Stripped of rights and freedom, the people have rebelled many times throughout her reign. However, rebellions are quickly crushed as she brings the leaders to the dreaded Hall of Mirrors...

An anechoic chamber, this hall is a maze with ceilings, floors and walls covered with mirrors. Any sound is absorbed by these special mirrors. It's so quiet in there that one can hear their own organs functioning. Surrounded by their reflections and with no sound but their own thoughts, it isn't long before victims begin to hallucinate. Spending over forty five minutes could make somebody go insane. Nobody enters the Hall without coming out changed...apart from the Queen herself.

As conditions in New Seoul deteriorate, a new resistance rises out of the ashes of its predecessors and this time it's more than a few riots; it's war. However, it doesn't seem like one they're going to win - that is, until a young woman appears from nowhere and helps to turn the tables.


 

Foreword


Hey. So this was my newest contest entry! It is an entry for HYOYEON || Writing Contest.

The prompt I'm using is;

There comes a time when you look into the mirror and you realize that what you see is all you will ever be. And then you accept it. Or you kill yourself. Or you stop looking in mirrors. - Tennessee Williams.

This is inspired by this post on tumblr and the following songs; [x] [x] [x]

Enjoy!

Note: I live in Ireland so some spellings may be different than the ones you are familiar with, eg Color = Colour, Traveler = Traveller etc.

ScissorsandElves
Doing some editing. Putting this as private during said editing.

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haruma2911
#1
Chapter 7: daebakk~~ just finished this story..
i have to carefully and slowly read so that i didn't missed out any part ( plus, i'm imagining the situation)..
still..good story...

(^^)v
hyo_jinki
#2
WARNING: Contains spoiler for those who haven't read this.


Even if you've given me the notice, when I first read it I was like 'isn't it Zelo-centric?' but I read further and like 90% sure that the queen was Hyoyeon (I was half-true though. xD). When she shared her story to Donghae about her parents, I was 100% sure she was the queen. But why would she help them if she was the evil? Was she trying to lure them into her trap and kill them at once? I was really curious that I read really fast to get to the end faster. LOL. I have to say that the ending was a bit rushed (dw, I do that a lot too. xD). I actually would love to read more about the alternate timelines; maybe a flashback on how she first arrived on that timeline, watching the sad condition and then realized that it might be her other self who did the evil deeds, until she met Hyukjae.
This story has really good twists; I kept on guessing and kept on mistaken. xD At the end I thought she would die together with the Queen because they were the same person, but it didn't happen (I like your happier ending more, btw. :)) I have never thought about the possibility of timelines though thinking about it back you've given some clues about it. xD

Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this. Definitely worth the win. Thank you for this story, and good job! ^^
lunarwing
#3
Chapter 7: Awwwhhh this story is to sad :'(
but I really like the idea and the plot :)
keep up the good work :)
QueenFlora
#4
Chapter 7: I really love this story!!!!!
SilenTmE #5
Chapter 7: I knew donghae was the sneaky bastard.. But can't blame him for being selfish..
This was definitely an interesting and different story. Different dimensions coexist is an intriguing concept..
It does seems rush but all is wel.. No more answers..
Cheerio
FolderName
#6
Chapter 7: I've got my HyoHyuk as well LoL thanks for the story once again dear~
FolderName
#7
Chapter 7: Dear~ you totally blowing me off with the ending.. I was shocked to see its completed and even with the rush you're doing great and I'm so loving this.. I'm not gonna lie that I'm not confused but heck you wrapped it well :D
K-loverKpopDramafan
#8
Chapter 6: So Time traveller Hyo is from the future?
IcyWish
#9
From Ireland?
I'm Irish!
Visted Ireland once before!! :D