Butterfly's Touch

Description

Their friendship was like the touch of a butterfly - precious and fragile.

One wrong move and everything could break.

Foreword

This is a contest enty to the ❄ frozen heart ↷ writing contest; the prompt I chose is "Even the tiniest of hope can show me the way to arrive at my goal."

And the beautiful poster goes to Poster Paradise! ^^

Please don't forget to drop some comments,

yours,

beatingheart

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jeanrybear #1
Chapter 1: The story is great.
I hope you'll write more haesica fics ^^
minnie16 #2
Chapter 1: Awww it's a nice one shot, cute :)
Minnie.
tiasica #3
Chapter 1: Nice one! Want to read more... :)
overact #4
Chapter 1: I love it! The story are great! And I want a sequel... Dudududu ;;)
LolliLovee #5
Chapter 1: I didn't finish it yet, but there was something that kind of irked me when I was reading it, the dialogue. When writing dialogue you tend to put your quotations before the comma or have periods where a comma should be. For instance:
"blah blah blah.", should really be "blah blah blah," said him.

And if you're writing with exclamation points or question marks or even ellipses, you don't need a comma. Like: "blah blah blah!", should really be "blah blah blah!"
Vanilla2915 #6
Chapter 1: LOVE IT!!!!!!
SEQUEL!!!SEQUEL!!!SEQUEL!!!SEQUEL!!!SEQUEL!!! PLEASE!
Haesicalove #7
Chapter 1: AWWWE! It was so nicely written! great job. You should make more haesica fanfics
itzy104 #8
Chapter 1: Aweeeeeesomeeeeee........a sequel would be nice.......cuz I love this story.....
nerdscandy #9
Chapter 1: Awww oh my the haesica feels <3
I loved how this had a central point/story that could apply to our lives, and it was beautifully written
linaaak3 #10
Chapter 1: awww that was so sweet.
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