One Shot

Description

As a newly formed gang and rising like a rocket up to the top, B.A.P made more enemies than friends. They never attempted to form an alliance with other gangs but they never attempted to challenge them either. However, when the biggest and strongest gang started to feel threatened by the group of six men, they had to take action.

Foreword

After listening to One Shot and watching the MV for god knows how many times, I have decided not to wait until I finish my current writing projects and jumped straight to starting this one. Please support this! It's based on B.A.P's new song, One Shot so...it's a fanfic of the song, I guess.

Here are the characters:

Name: Bang Yong Guk

Status: B.A.P leader

Name: Kim Him Chan

Status: Mechanic of B.A.P

Name: Jung Dae Hyun

Status: Soldier of B.A.P

Name: Yoo Young Jae

Status: Brains of B.A.P

Name: Moon Jong Up

Status: Soldier of B.A.P

Name: Zelo

Status: Soldier of B.A.P

Name: Lee Hae Sung

Status: Yong Guk's wife

Name: Nam Bi Jeong

Status: Him Chan's girlfriend, mechanic of B.A.P

Name: Im Yoon Hye

Status: Dae Hyun's ex-girlfriend

Name: Yang Seung Yong

Status: Young Jae's secret girlfriend

Name: Ellie Park

Status: Jong Up's deceased girlfriend

Name: JY Lee

Status: Zelo's girlfriend

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chquine #1
I really liked it! =D
There were a few rough edges here and there but it was good!
I feel so conflicted about Zico, Zelo and JY's love triangle. In my opinion, Zico deserves her more than Zelo, but you can't dictate the heart what to feel and JY's heart in this fic screams Zelo so I can live... =D
Himchan and Bijeong are cute! =D
Yongguk's relationship with his wife is a beautiful one and I can tell that he really loves her.
I really felt bad for Seung Yong... poor girl... she lost Youngjae. I'd rather the alternate ending because for me Seung Yong deserves a happy ending with Youngjae... I mean I like them all but Seung Yong's case is entirely different because they're having a baby...
I'm ranting so I'm going to end with...



GOOD JIB!! =D ^_^V
Lollie
#2
Chapter 20: This should have gained more loveeeeeee <3
skyblaze208
#3
Chapter 20: OOOOOOOOH extra shot! :D Me liiiike~
LOL Daebutt tryin' to be a reporter again. Bwahaha.
Wait, who's that randon YH in teh middle that said "Seung Yong-noona"?
Awww so Ellie's actually gone too? :( Wah. Come back soooon!
PinkyExorcist
#4
Sounds interesting ;)
I also get inspiration for fanfics while watching one shot,
just I wonder if I can haha
As I read comments below, I'm starting reading your story XD
JungMini
#5
interesting !!!!
skyblaze208
#6
Chapter 19: D'aw. But what were everyone else's reactions? xD
Wahh, they're all in jail, booo! Except Zelo and Jongup, right? Aw Youngjae you traitorous , you. xP
WAHH I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER ALREADY! It feels like just a day ago, you were posting the foreword and now...! Sigh. you write so fast. IDK how you do it. <3 Looking forward to your Daefic, whoohhooo!
jongupuppy
#7
Chapter 19: wow it's already over??!!! ommoo! but why you didnt mention the rest of b.a.p member? how bout their feeling about young jae true identity? aaaaah....

it's cool but i choose the previous end. i hate betrayer tbh -___- eventhough he's a police kekeke~
K-PopFangurl22
#8
Chapter 19: I love this fic and I'm a little sad to see it finish! :/ Its like a part of me is missing somehow...*cries in corner*
But in the last part, isn't the girl's name supposed to be Seung Yong? You put Yoon Hye LOL XD
jongupuppy
#9
Chapter 18: did young jae really gone? ommo i caaaant ToT ToT
skyblaze208
#10
Chapter 18: Yay, JY remembered! Aw poor Zico, lol. BUT YAAAAAAAAAAAY
I FEEL AN ENDING COMING ONNN
Oh nooo, Youngjae, nooo you weren't supposed to actually be dead, you idiot! How can you abandon your poor wife-to-be and son like that?! Sigh. This pabo.