Just Say Yes (One-Shot)

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                    "I-I I'm not heartless, Jjong! I'm completely human and you know that! It's just that I can't. I-I can't because... I-I just can't, okay?" He answered the cry of Jonghyun, tugging onto his beautiful locks, which he just fixed a while ago. He leaned over the sink, holding onto its sides for support. His heart was breaking, his weak heart was giving in.

 

                      Kibum was the one who'll complete him and make him truly happy, but reality was cruel. Reality was too selfish to give Jonghyun what he had been asking for such a long time.

Foreword

My first JongKey fic~

Author's Thoughts
jinkssi
Thank you guys~ ^^
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Cheonsa8 #1
Chapter 1: Ahhh, it was really amazing and beautiful! :D Congratulation! ;) I loved this one-shot! :D Great job! <3
DubuIsLove #2
Chapter 1: This was just so painfully beautiful -sniffles-
I just loved how you showed that beneath that cold exterior, Key was actually the most vulnerable out of the two...though he was the one that seemed to be heartless, he was the one who was the most hurt and most scared T.T
The way he said...that he only has his heart left and Jjong was asking for it..I cried :'( poor Key...I want to cuddle him forever and ever.

And Jjong...he was so rich and everything...but so lonely...
When he said he wanted Key's everything... God that was beautiful...
It was a great story.. :) loved it :)
Bambi10 #3
Chapter 1: It was such a great story!!
Ilonahaku #4
Chapter 1: It was great! ^^/

I felt really sorry for Key that he had such horrible job and that he was so scared to risk his heart. T.T But it makes perfect sense that it was the only thing which he had.
I am glad that Jjong didnt give up on him and that he could hear yes from Key in the end. It was also great for both of them to hear their feelings, so they could understand each other well. :)
It is also sad how Jjong wasnt loved by his parents, I am glad that hat he was willing to risk his heart despite the fact that it was the only thing which he really owned. :)
I was also happy that Key could finally feel safe in Jjong´s embrace and felt hope for their future. :D

Sometimes the moments which change our decision can appear so simple and unimportant, but they are so significant in reality. Who would say that his confession and 1 hug could change everything, right? :)

I love how you described Jjong´s feelings about Key who seemed to be the missing piece for him. <3 That part was so beautiful. <3


I love these lines:
"I already told you that I'd pay for everything. Everything. What part of everything can you not understand?"
"I have a world outside of this room, too!"
MiaBlinger #5
Chapter 1: It's so so so so beautiful ;__ ; JongKey and the power of love <3~ I love it <3<3<3 and also I get to know a lovely song <3~ great job ^_^
PandaAteMyCupcake #6
Chapter 1: Beautiful!! The passion of Jongkey~ keke
GardenOfDestruction #7
Chapter 1: Totally cute ;__;
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