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Chapter 3: Hahaha I think this was my favorite chapter. I kind of wanted to smack Kyu when he though Yesung had ditched him. I mean come on Kyu do you honestly think the love of your life would ditch you in your birthday? *Sigh* sometimes these two are really too insecure in their love, though I understand their worries and fears. However, I hope they will always be able to overcome said insecurities with love and kisses, lots of kisses ^_~.
I snorted when Kyu complained about what Yesung made him considering he couldn't do any better I bet. Kyuhyun wishing for Yesungs happiness is just the sweetest thing. I think my favorite line was Kyuhyun's 'there is something much better you can give me hyung', just cause ert Kyu is the best XD. Poor Eunhyuk, wrong time to walk in, especially when Kyuhyun is on Yesung mode (which is basically all the time lol).

I can see why you loved this fic, cause I did too, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I'm a winter child too, in fact, my birthday is exactly 4 days before Kyu's <3. The title Precious Winter Child couldn't apply to him more. This was perfect authornim! Excellent work, this was a wonderful read.

Chapter 2: Can I just say that the pic at the beginning of this chapter is absolute adorable? Cause it is, and Yesung's pick hair does not help me calm my feels. But contrary to the pic the start of this chapter was quite sullen. It's never good when they fight, but I can see why Kyu would be so angry considering he will be able to spend even less time with Yesung and their bed sharing scenes will be very limited now (which is majority of their relationship honestly lol).

I'm actually curious if the issue of Yesung moving out was addressed in one of your other fics, cause I'd really like to see how that discussion plays out from both their views. It's always interesting to see how these to comprehend situations differently, and while it may lead to misunderstandings, it always makes for good plot lol.

I was glad when it picked up at the end with more bed sharing and Kyu being a brat again : ). The poetry part was hilarious, though luckily I think Yesung would never write a love letter period, no matter how amusing it would be for me to read. Another amazing chapter, especially because it ended with them in each others arms <3.

Chapter 1: I love the fact that Changmin knows about Kyuhyun's relationship with Yesung and teases him about it, it's quite entertaining lol. And of course Kyuhyun can't completely and fully feel uplifted without Yesung there. Yesung calling Kyu at midnight made me smile ~ the tradition continues ^_^. And $500 dollars for wine? Dang, Kyu really is spoiled rotten, and not just by Yesung it would seem XD. But Yesung will always be the better spoiler cause he's Kyu's special hyung ; ). Great first Chapter!

Chapter 3: is the girl victoria

Chapter 3: it took me three days to read this.
it saddened me that Yesung left the apartment without saying anything to Kyuhyun... I think Kyuhyun had the right to feel uncertain.

thank you for writing this ^^ I'll be waiting for the 84k fic ;D

Chapter 3: you were right about the cheese, lol. But i like how you worked in Kyuhyun's issue.

you need to post the longfic because I need to publicly spazz over it(although you did make me swear on tumblr, lol).

Love this! I like how you can combine both what we see publicly with what happens privately, which is what most writes did not do. It sorts of makes it more 'real'. Also like how you explain their thoughts, instead of writing lines after lines of speech. This allows us readers to understand their thoughts and actions more. Congrats on a job well done! Can't wait for the 84k fic.